In the Lions Den

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Recent atrocities called to mind how evil ones are inhumane, spurred on by an unseen force that dominates the world, spurring individuals and nations onward in a desperate last ditch attempt at greedily taking what they want regardless of the consequences. Lion like ferocity is their trademark seemed to be a fitting metaphor.

He roars from the distance, instilling in everyone, terror and fear
Approaching stealthily, though unseen, somehow you sense he's near.
Then, in an incomprehensible instant of time, before you can react
The lion lunges at you, the unwary prey, in an outrageous attack.

The roar is intentional, skillfully utilized, to inspire fear, to paralyze
Shaking, quaking, fearing imminent death, the hopeless ones realize
The time has come, ready or not, for their premature earthly demise
Perhaps unaware, that God has prepared for all, an earthly paradise.

The lion is a beast, an enraged animal, with an insatiable appetite
Targeting humanity, especially the innocent, inexperienced in the fight
Hatred and extremism, promulgated by evil men, wicked schemes roar
Propaganda machine running full steam operators tabulating the score.

Wicked people brutalizing others, committing atrocities are inhumane
Deceived human agents of a malevolent unseen lion who's gone insane
This diabolical lion, is on the prowl, ever watchful, seeking to devour prey
Righteous humans will survive unharmed, if they humbly seek God and pray.

John Derek Hamilton  November 18, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/18/2015 5:52:00 PM
His roar is getting more desperate. Nicely stated, John.
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Lin how do you do it? Visit everyone, so many poems so many comments wow!JDH
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