In the Knowing

Love and I… face to face at last… remembering the dark of our fall…recalling the presence of our winter…when the threads of my pulse ran cold. Do you remember love, when the fire turned to ashes…and we sought the forever spring in us… for we feared this space between life and death without the encounter of human touch. Come to me love, like a jealous river… eager to be a part of a frenzied sea. Love…find comfort in knowing …you and I will always be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 5:43 PM
T.Nicole, I have enjoyed this love poem I felt like I was part of it.
Devers Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:35 AM
I particularly like the last 4 lines. The jealous river and the frenzied sea make for powerful imagery and symbolism..
Inman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Now your newest, a wonderfully written verse of the desire for companionship and the need for physical closeness.
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Thank you James for commenting! Wishing you a great evening!
Vaso Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Just saw your lifetime membership so dropped by to say hello!
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Hi Arthur...thank you for stoping in! :-)
Asuncion Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 8:40 PM
It reminds me of the song TOGETHER FOREVER (You And I) popularized by Rico J. Puno.... Congrats on being featured...
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 5:18 PM
:-) thank you Bernard...will check out the song you mention!
Teaser Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Nice work..Love is always a difficult subject..
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 5:21 PM
You are so right...writing about love is not easy...it has so many facets to it. Thank you for replying to this piece!
Vaso Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Sweet and beautiful! :)
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 5:21 PM
:-) Thank you Arthur!
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