In the Invisibility

whereas I, by chance, talking to myself, finding myself
alone, enclosed by four walls and a door, knock
to see, in the invisibility, with x-ray ability, not held,
if you dear reader, sitting by your nightlight, might
switch it on and find a word to speak silently
or out loud; your choice. the ones you borrow

from a native tongue, feeling
their incomprehensible weight,

stopping mid-sentence, to ponder if you are moved
in the slightest bit; I’m biting my lip in anticipation,
though I’ve no inkling that you're mulling over
my thoughts, my doubts, my innards, my all.

now, I, think of you, sitting by a scintilla of light,
moonlight marvels at the roundness of your lips
as you nearly sing your “o’s;” sonnets seem
sensual alongside the bed, though always grieving.
love is a dog, a walk in the woods, a lark.

leave me be. let me remember you as I long to.
don’t say goodbye, but leave my sighs on the table,
where you first met me, and I almost met you,
and you, dear reader, take back up with me,

though now there’s a familiarity between us,
lost in the shadows, amidst the stars
and you can nearly hear me breathing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rigoler Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 1:52 PM
The last three lines to this touching poem encapsulates all the ideas mentioned in the first five stanzas. It's as perfect an ending to any of your poems I have ever read. Bravo! / Maurice.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Wow! Thank you so much, Maurice!
Gifford Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Hello Kim, this is a beautiful write. Four walls and a door, that type of peace and silence sets the soul free to wander. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day and a great weekend.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 11:03 AM
It does, doesn’t it?! Thank you, Zyrool!
Tor Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 9:31 PM
The peace of solitude can bring focus and the past to ponder and reflect ignighting past flames that were once experienced. Lovely write Kim, thank you for sharing. Hugs...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Thank you for a lovely comment, Mike!
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Like a raw diamond that is awaiting the expert eye and hand to cut and fashion the facets, so your poem reveals startling light in its depths to the reader. I enjoyed reading this, Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much, Suzette! I appreciate you! Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 4:11 AM
Creative one with much descriptiveness and imagination. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Rolland Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 12:03 AM
it is so good to be familiar with the reader, not walking alone, and writing with talent, enjoyed your poem dear poet
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Yann!
George Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:16 PM
This is a poem of a unique kind, quite profound too. Sometimes, sitting in my room surrounded by four walls, especially at night, I too have such strange and similar thoughts. I am able to visualize the images of those who I have never met, but feel familiar through poems and words written and spoken. As a reader, I feel the power of your words and feel close to you.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa! <3
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 7:20 PM
How could you ever be alone? This is an intense piece, one " familiarity" where I'm learning more about your world, and as much love as it can go, here, from your faithful reader, <3
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 7:20 PM
It's such raw and powerful talent! :)
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