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When the earth's shadow falls on the moon. In the loneliness of twilight I keep you alive and fresh in my mind You seem so near every time I close my eyes Oftentimes I venture into the eventide When the moon invites me, reminiscing as nightjars chatter your name Do you miss me as much as I miss you? The light of the moon shines enough light for me to see nebulous memories of us more clearly Under moonlit skies, we savored nature's cacophony until our eyes grew weary with sleep The memory of you haunts me still Though you'll never return, I'll always think of you In the hour of the vanishing sun Date written and posted: 02/04/2017

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Date: 3/2/2021 3:26:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your honorable in Carolyn's contest _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/2/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
Date: 3/1/2021 11:47:00 AM
Edward, I love this poem, but it is well beyond the line limits for the contest. Pity. Beautifully penned! Hugs, Carolyn
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/1/2021 11:51:00 AM
No worries, Carolyn:-) I'm actually glad you placed it. Thank you! God bless.
Date: 3/1/2021 11:29:00 AM
This is beautifully written, Edward and I can't believe that it has not been commented on before. It's a shame that it was outside of the allocated wordcount for this contest or I'm sure it would have placed higher.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/1/2021 11:37:00 AM
Doesn't matter to me as I wanted this lost poem discovered, and now it has. To me, a win is a win! Thanks for the wonderful feedback and visit, Wendy:-)

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