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In the Hazy Light

Variegated streaks criss-crossing, soothing lavender then fiery maroon, with belts of amber in between. Slate blue bluffs catch the sun before it lands, dipping into the rippling orange of the mottled lake. The pitch black pines are still, passed the rusty mesh of a rickety screen door. Our eyes were fixed up to the moment your coppered profile became shadow, and I could see you no more in the hazy light.

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Date: 7/6/2023 3:02:00 AM
Beautiful Kelly. Your verse reminds me that poetry is what happens when we let our eyes do the talking. Thanks for sharing..............peace!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/17/2024 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Ricky. I appreciate the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 6/27/2023 4:51:00 PM
Trying to picture I'm sure it's beautiful.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/17/2024 7:20:00 PM
Thank you for reading, John... I shall try to make the picture a little clearer in my next poem :)
Date: 6/27/2023 4:15:00 PM
enjoyed, images and words, for final emotion , have a nice day
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2024 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

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