In the Graveyard

I remember I roamed on that night -
as a sceptic, I thought it was fun,
but received such a terrible fright,
when I spotted the ghost of the nun.
In the midst of the yard was a tomb,
and she hovered beside it and wailed,
that I sensed her a portent of doom, 
and my heart (that was strong) almost failed
as I counted the number of souls,
and the eyes of those spirits were red.
What a stench as they rose from the holes
to escape from the house of the dead!
I was praying and crying in fear;
but by morning I blamed it on beer...

written 23rd February for Julia's Ghost contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful graveyard story/write. The beer always gets the blame. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Seeker Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Hahaha! Terror and humour together! Congrats on your win!
Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:34 AM
teehee Jack! A well-deserved win! Congratulations! Linda
La France Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Jack, a big congratulations on your Podium win in Julia's contest, you are always good with these scary themes, well done _Constance
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:54 AM
Now this is an excellent poem Jack, funny and scary all at the same time.
Callus Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 5:48 AM
From the depths of a chilly encounter to the effect of chilly beer! Your narratives always entertain, my friend. Regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Reads like a good contender for sure. Way to go. It kind of drew me in and I read it with speed. Thanks for all the visits. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Very well done!
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February 23, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Oh, this is terrific, Jack! You have always been a terrific storyteller and this one gave me chills. (Love the humor in the last line too.) Best wishes for a big win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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