In the Garden

Fog
Morning
The silence
Camelia
On the ground some unknown reptilia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:24 PM
Great imagery here, Jim. Even has a goth feel ... smile ...
Brown Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 11:19 AM
Enjoyed this poem Jim. Love the little guys at a distance. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Jim this poem brought a smile to my face - I love to watch them scurry about - God Bless, MJ
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Interesting writing brought me in with the simplicity but descriptive nature. Sara
Arteaga Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 10:28 AM
sound mysterious to me but i like it very interesting.
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