Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

In the Fragility of Dreams I Dream

I dream of our love,                                                                                                              it’s like thin pieces of glass.                                                                                                Oh so new,                                                                                                                        will it last.                                                                                                                            I dream of kisses,                                                                                                                like dew on a rose.                                                                                                              I dream of hugs,                                                                                                                  like a soft new born baby to hold.                                                                                        I dream of you and me,                                                                                                        will we last or just shatter. 


Date Written 5/17/2020

3 Place    In the fragility of dreams Contest Judged:5/27/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2020 at 2:21 PM - Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2020 at 3:04 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, there can be many parts to a dream. Have a wonderful day with hugs...........

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 1:55 PM This one is so soothing Paula. Congratulations on your win :) Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2020 at 3:01 PM Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...........

Silent One May 27, 2020 at 7:06 AM Only time will tell.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2020 at 12:08 PM Thank you, for your note. I did not know I had Won. It is an honor. So many wonderful writers in the Soup. Have a great day.......

Tom Cunningham May 17, 2020 at 4:01 PM Love your interpretation Paula, good luck in the contest. Have a great week. Stay safe Tom Paula Goldsmith May 17, 2020 at 6:26 PM Thank You, for your note and good luck. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful week..........