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In the Fragility of Dreams I Dream

I dream of our love, it’s like thin pieces of glass. Oh so new, will it last. I dream of kisses, like dew on a rose. I dream of hugs, like a soft new born baby to hold. I dream of you and me, will we last or just shatter. Date Written 5/17/2020 3 Place In the fragility of dreams Contest Judged:5/27/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2020 2:21:00 PM

- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2020 3:04:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, there can be many parts to a dream. Have a wonderful day with hugs...........

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/27/2020 1:55:00 PM

This one is so soothing Paula. Congratulations on your win :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2020 3:01:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...........

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2020 7:06:00 AM

Only time will tell.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2020 12:08:00 PM

Thank you, for your note. I did not know I had Won. It is an honor. So many wonderful writers in the Soup. Have a great day.......

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/17/2020 4:01:00 PM

Love your interpretation Paula, good luck in the contest. Have a great week. Stay safe Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/17/2020 6:26:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and good luck. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful week..........