Andrea Dietrich Poet Etheree

In the Fragility of Dreams

In the fragility of dreams, I am
young -always young- and in a good dream
I am my best self once again.
All my senses are intact -
normal as they should be!
Discomfort has fled,
for nothing plagues
me, and then
I wake
up.

May 18, 2020

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John Watt May 28, 2020 at 10:38 AM Keep dreaming, my wonderful poetry friend! Congratulations for your win ~ John

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2020 at 2:25 PM - Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 1:48 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea :)

Joseph May May 27, 2020 at 7:57 AM Congrats on your win Andrea

Silent One May 27, 2020 at 6:48 AM Another great etheree... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

John Hardison May 19, 2020 at 1:09 PM It said dreams are like a banana peal on which we all slip away. I just woke from one only to miss an appointment I dreamed I was on my way to. Don't get old! Peace, Love and Joy

Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2020 at 12:37 PM There is no perfect world on earth, just in heaven. But we have our dreams! This is a wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. Blessings xxoo

Juliet Ligon May 19, 2020 at 10:50 AM Nice emphasis on always being young in dreams. I'd never really thought of it that way, but I'm younger in dreams as well.

Eileen Manassian May 19, 2020 at 3:10 AM Sometimes one wishes to stay in dreamland. You reinforce this in your poem, dear. Hope all is well. Blessings.

Aditi Mishra May 18, 2020 at 10:51 PM I love the way you instill hope and strength in the fragility of your dreams Andrea, that spirit if never giving up. God bless you and all the best :)

John Watt May 18, 2020 at 10:36 PM An exceptional etheree, Andrea! It does seem that we are always young in our dreams, doesn't it? Best wishes in the contest, which just closed today. You should do well...

Michael Tor May 18, 2020 at 9:09 PM Sometimes we find comfort in our dreams then we wake up to a reality that we don't care for.. Truth in this one.

Gershon Wolf May 18, 2020 at 8:36 PM Maybe this why it's so hard to get out of bed these days! lol. :) gw

Regina Mcintosh May 18, 2020 at 8:11 PM This is such a excellent entry... I truly love it and am faving it. It's perfect for a contest such as this one. God bless you dear friend with love and prayers, Gina