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In the Fragility of Dreams

In the fragility of dreams, I am young -always young- and in a good dream I am my best self once again. All my senses are intact - normal as they should be! Discomfort has fled, for nothing plagues me, and then I wake up. May 18, 2020

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:38:00 AM
Keep dreaming, my wonderful poetry friend! Congratulations for your win ~ John
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Date: 5/27/2020 2:25:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:48:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 5/27/2020 6:48:00 AM
Another great etheree... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:09:00 PM
It said dreams are like a banana peal on which we all slip away. I just woke from one only to miss an appointment I dreamed I was on my way to. Don't get old! Peace, Love and Joy
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Date: 5/19/2020 12:37:00 PM
There is no perfect world on earth, just in heaven. But we have our dreams! This is a wonderful entry for the contest Andrea. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/19/2020 10:50:00 AM
Nice emphasis on always being young in dreams. I'd never really thought of it that way, but I'm younger in dreams as well.
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Date: 5/19/2020 3:10:00 AM
Sometimes one wishes to stay in dreamland. You reinforce this in your poem, dear. Hope all is well. Blessings.
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:51:00 PM
I love the way you instill hope and strength in the fragility of your dreams Andrea, that spirit if never giving up. God bless you and all the best :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:36:00 PM
An exceptional etheree, Andrea! It does seem that we are always young in our dreams, doesn't it? Best wishes in the contest, which just closed today. You should do well...
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Date: 5/18/2020 9:09:00 PM
Sometimes we find comfort in our dreams then we wake up to a reality that we don't care for.. Truth in this one.
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Date: 5/18/2020 8:36:00 PM
Maybe this why it's so hard to get out of bed these days! lol. :) gw
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Date: 5/18/2020 8:11:00 PM
This is such a excellent entry... I truly love it and am faving it. It's perfect for a contest such as this one. God bless you dear friend with love and prayers, Gina
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