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In the Fragility of Dreams

I am turning back the pages of time in my dream and I find myself again at our family home playing with my brother in the sandbox- I moan in my sleep this is a fragile place and painful place and I want to leave oh, why did you go to fight in that war so far away (WHY) don't worry sis, you said, I am a peacekeeper we don't fight but, you still came home in a flag draped box brother and now you are but a name engraved on a white cross_ the memories I have of you are fragile and tattered with time _________________________ May 17, 2020 Poetry/Verse/In the Fragility of Dreams Copyright Protected, ID 20-1252-925-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, In The Fragility of Dreams sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:24:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:52:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Constance. Always keep the spirit of your hopes alive. God bless you :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 7:02:00 AM
We never forget some memories... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/19/2020 9:51:00 AM
Very touching and deep! Great poem! Those doors in our dreams open to welcome those who are no longer with us!
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Date: 5/19/2020 2:15:00 AM
What a poignant piece this is. There is always a little hole left in your heart when you lose a loved one. A place that remains a little sensitive through the years. A fine write God Bless and stay well, JB
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Date: 5/19/2020 12:36:00 AM
Oh..what a heartwrentching write. I like where,you've gone with this poem, Dear. Good luck in the conest.
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:08:00 AM
A blend of honest emotions and memories with the beauty of the flow of your words. All the best :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2020 9:36:00 AM
Aditi, thanks for your compassion and compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 5/17/2020 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful inspiration. I enjoyed it immensely. Love to you and best wishes for the contest too. Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and love, appreciate _Constance

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