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In the Fall - Dorian's Five Eight and Five

~In The Fall~
(Dorian's Five Eight And Five)



Summer's almost gone
It means that fall will arrive soon
And this is just nice

Leaves from the trees change
Yellow reds browns golden all shades
Leaves in the air float

In fall all things change
Different sounds  smells all around
Thanksgiving we greet

Great food on display
Family get together to
Celebrate this day

In Halloween folks
Wear costumes of all kind some are
Scary some funny 

Love Halloween too
Night full of fun and playing tricks
Kids ask for candy

Go out trick or treat
Enjoy night imagining ghouls
Ghosts vampires witches

Fall is great season
The weather gets colder and crisp
Fall is beautiful!



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2015


July.31.2015



"Dorian's Five Eight And Five" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, 
Aka ladydp2000.

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Afolabi Muideen August 2, 2015 at 9:54 AM An excellence penned ..........A.M. Dorian Petersen Potter August 3, 2015 at 7:50 PM Thank you ever so kindly A.M,for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate it a lot:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Afolabi Muideen August 1, 2015 at 2:52 AM What a fabulous penned here, your write brought the readers sense to the midst of the fall, I love how you penned this with vivid imagery.............A.M. Dorian Petersen Potter August 1, 2015 at 6:36 PM Thank you ever so kindly A.M,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I do appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Gary Bateman July 31, 2015 at 11:28 AM Hello "D" Dear One, Another exquisitely articulated write for sure. I really like your "Dorian's Five Eight And Five" schema here. Outstanding overview and imagery of Autumn. This means a definite (without a doubt) "7" + FAV from me!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me, and Have a Great Weekend!! "G" Dorian Petersen Potter July 31, 2015 at 8:38 PM Hi there again G! Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I truly appreciate it all, the 7, the fav, and your most wonderful comments as always, my dear friend,G.You're always so kind!I'm so glad to know that you liked my Autumn poem, and also my "Dorian's Five Eight And Five" poetry style, in which I wrote this one.Sending love and prayers to you and Ingrid.Best to you always,G!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you!:)D.