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In the Depths of Poetry

can we touch on sheets of white where passion unfolds between the lines? i linger there in the ink of dreams as i stumble upon the whispers of thoughts through lips as they kiss in depths of metaphors a pulse within the words silently beats in the chambers of my heart a melody as stanzas fall softly upon soul's walls in the flickers of touch i become breathless in the climax a top these sheets in the depths of poetry

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Date: 12/4/2019 7:27:00 AM
Such a romantic romp on the sheets, Sandra, kissing in metaphor and loving the depths. Well done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/4/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much Phil :)
Date: 11/4/2019 7:38:00 PM
You do these blends of romance with poetry and poetry with romance so, so well. Love the way you combine them in inseparable form-function. Bravo. A FAVE for me. Thanks, Sandra. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/4/2019 8:19:00 PM
Wow thank you so much Gershon...it was a fun write...i am honored that you felt it was worthy enough to fave... hugs :)
Date: 11/4/2019 9:06:00 AM
I too become breathless floating within your sensually beautiful thoughts my friend. Your words sing the sweetest melody of the joy you find when you immerse yourself in poetry. I loved everything about this.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:52:00 PM
your comments are always so uplifting my friend, thank you so much...i needed the smiles your words bring... hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2019 10:53:00 PM
Yes, words can take us on a journey, if we let them. Kinda crazy, kinda cool... Awesome penning, Sandra :)
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much HT...i like getting lost in the journey of words sometimes...you can visit many places without leaving home.... :)
Date: 11/3/2019 8:23:00 PM
This one reminds me of your rewriting poetry, but I think I like this one better, not sure they're all great, thanks for the upbeat read!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 8:29:00 PM
similar thoughts in the other one i was the writer, in this one i am the reader being touched.... i knew this one would be a better read to get away from sadness... thank you John... hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2019 5:51:00 PM
Your lines in love of poetry inspire Sandra! "i linger there in the ink of dreams". What a fantastic quote to remember! Outstanding work my friend. This is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 6:41:00 PM
Wow...thank you so much Connie...i am ever so grateful that you faved this one and touched by your words...XoXo... hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2019 5:38:00 PM
You have spoken for all of the poets, and it is wonderful Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Caren....it's wonderful when we can get lost in a poem, wrapped in the emotions of another's words or take a journey with them.... hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2019 1:56:00 PM
WoW! I really like the way you describe the passion of a poet for writing. This is excellent. I think it deserves POTD. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Judy....your comment made me smile, God bless you.... hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 1:39:00 PM
I like this poem, a passionate write about poetry. Good going!
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike :)
Date: 11/3/2019 1:37:00 PM
such passion flows from your pen Sandra, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan....for the kind words and the faving of the poem...i am honored and touched :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 12:06:00 PM
- ... me too .... breathless, Sandra :) - Wow ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise....trying to lift my mood from yesterday, even though today is still a painful one.... :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 11:38:00 AM
Damn... To make love like poetry.... This is a great sensual write...
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thank you my friend....i love being pulled into a poem...some can get you lost in the words...i love metaphors too...guess this metaphor was well penned :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 10:50:00 AM
I enjoyed lingering in the ink of dreams..and the melody of pulse..within depths of your poetry, Sandy. Excellent write my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I love poetry that touches on emotions and takes you on a journey... trying to lift my self from yesterday’s gloominess Hugs :)

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