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There once was a girl who fell in the deep, so deep in the sea where waves roll and sweep; around she did spin and twirl, over- over she did whirl; till the sea whispered this girl I will keep ! Her long blonde hair was golden like the sun, with eyes blue hues of the sea and sky spun; on her neck sea shells tinkled, years aged- she never wrinkled; pirate ship sailors she took one by one ! ____________________________ July 31, 2019 Poetry/Limerick/In The Deep, Deep Blue Sea Copyright Protected, ID 19-1170-045-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Two Sea Themed Limericks sponsor, Tania Kitchen Tenth Place

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Date: 8/11/2019 5:55:00 PM
oh my! great one, congrats dear heart :)-luloo
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Date: 8/11/2019 12:31:00 PM
How cute this is, Dear Heart. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/11/2019 7:35:00 AM
I love the imagery in this one, Constance! Ahh... Congratulations!
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Date: 8/8/2019 2:18:00 AM
Serves them pirates right, lovely limerick Constance. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2019 10:16:00 PM
Constance, what an honor to share in the winner's circle with you! Great limericks!
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:59:00 PM
Fab! Great Win
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Date: 8/7/2019 8:12:00 PM
Love your limerick style and tale. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/7/2019 7:24:00 PM
Love it. Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 8/7/2019 6:33:00 PM
so lovely to see your fun side Constance:-) this remids me of the legend of Lorelei:-)hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2019 6:02:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your witty and fun limerick!
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Date: 8/5/2019 10:48:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart … she was the Siren who lured the Sailors to their demise I imagine - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay
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Date: 7/31/2019 6:31:00 PM
I like it! Good Luck
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