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In the Deep, Deep Blue Sea

There once was a girl who fell in the deep, so deep in the sea where waves roll and sweep; around she did spin and twirl, over- over she did whirl; till the sea whispered this girl I will keep ! Her long blonde hair was golden like the sun, with eyes blue hues of the sea and sky spun; on her neck sea shells tinkled, years aged- she never wrinkled; pirate ship sailors she took one by one ! ____________________________ July 31, 2019 Poetry/Limerick/In The Deep, Deep Blue Sea Copyright Protected, ID 19-1170-045-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Two Sea Themed Limericks sponsor, Tania Kitchen Tenth Place
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Scars Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 5:55 PM
oh my! great one, congrats dear heart :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:31 PM
How cute this is, Dear Heart. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 7:35 AM
I love the imagery in this one, Constance! Ahh... Congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 2:18 AM
Serves them pirates right, lovely limerick Constance. Congrats on your win. Tom
Moorman Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Constance, what an honor to share in the winner's circle with you! Great limericks!
Mcguire Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:59 PM
Fab! Great Win
Mcgee Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Love your limerick style and tale. Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Love it. Congrats on your win, Constance.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 6:33 PM
so lovely to see your fun side Constance:-) this remids me of the legend of Lorelei:-)hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your witty and fun limerick!
Laurie Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Hello Dear Heart … she was the Siren who lured the Sailors to their demise I imagine - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:31 PM
I like it! Good Luck
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