In the Deep

I dug a hole,
a hole so deep,
I felt the heat
beneath my feet,
the fire of hell
burning in me.

Into the hole
I placed my heart,
still beating heart,
I buried deep
beneath the clay
beneath my feet.

Abysmal hole,
but shoal at first,
grew and grew with
each spade of earth,
each memory,
I buried deep.

You endless hole
mesmerize me
in dank dark pitch
my reverie,
mud encased, in
each spade of earth.

Feculent hole,
insipid beast,
you’re all that’s foul
entombed in me
my horrid thoughts,
my reverie.

This deep dark hole,
inside my soul,
is where you’ll see
my heart yet beat,
my broken heart,
entombed in me.


11/23/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/10/2017 7:46:00 PM
oh my goodness, DEEP indeed, my friend, and so dark. Is it related to how you are feeling in general this year. Soup mail me if you want to let me know what is going on with you this year and the special person who is having problems. I can't believe I missed two good poems of yours!!
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James Inman
Date: 12/11/2017 4:31:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/9/2017 1:02:00 AM
This is a mesmerizing composition, James. So many memorable moments...one of my favorites being the third stanza. I love how you intensify your adjectives with each new stanza. This one reminds me a bit of Edgar Allen Poe. I love the rich wording ..insipid...abysmal.."in dank dark pitch".. love it! To my favorites it goes! Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 12/9/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Laura, Poe is a great influence for me and I'm flattered for the comparison.
Date: 11/29/2017 10:00:00 PM
Wow, James. This is deep! A great read, flowed nicely, interesting topic. Love it
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James Inman
Date: 11/30/2017 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for the great comment Rhoda, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/23/2017 10:41:00 PM
A captivating heart felt poem. At the end to be entombed by the feeling of is what I felt was a great write. Enjoyed the flow and topic.
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James Inman
Date: 11/24/2017 12:59:00 AM
Thank you for your visit Kristina.
Date: 11/23/2017 10:37:00 AM
Well written, James! Deep in thought --feels sad!
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
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