In the Deep

touching heartbeats
running deep
two hearts
began beating
as one
love alone
you touch
my feelings

if i were 
to die
please leave
my body be
heartbreaking within
to see
yet not being able
to wipe away
loves teardrops

falling hurt
consumed emotion
in the other piece
of ones heart
touched in 
the deepest
part of heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Breidenthal Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 12:27 AM
You incorporate words in such a lovely way. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Keep up the fantastic work. Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 10:07 PM
You have deep emotions that you show in your poetry. Very nice.
Carroll Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Hey Liam, Wonderful write buddy. Ken
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace