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In the Dawn

In the dawn, bewildered the grey sky, whether to opt the light orange or the scarlet red or plain blue. But then cogitating of the arising sun the golden yellow dress, she dons With no vehicles' noise and gadgets' sound around even the breeze chooses to blow in silence. Amidst the stillness, I barely stand on my terrace, accumulating magical energy from the rising sun, consuming immaculate smell of the half bloomed flower and immersing myself in the heavenly tunes of silence. And when my soul develops seeds and when I am about to disperse awakens my senses, the mystical song of robin. Mar 26 2021

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Date: 4/11/2021 11:21:00 AM
Nicely written.
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Date: 3/28/2021 2:17:00 PM
a lot of beautiful images here, Supraja. Love how you immersed yourself and are awakened at the end by the robin's mystical song.
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Date: 3/27/2021 11:56:00 AM
sounds like a wonderful place to refresh one's soul.Blessings Richard.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/27/2021 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/26/2021 11:56:00 AM
A phantasmagoria of imagery creating the miracle of dawn! Divinely written, dearest Supraja!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/26/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment... Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/26/2021 6:43:00 AM
A delightful description of dawn. Your imagery is perfect. Loved it.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/26/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor... Glad you liked it...
Date: 3/26/2021 6:16:00 AM
So very beautiful is your dawn. A delightful write in pleasant imagery. Really well done.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/26/2021 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much... So glad you liked it... Thanks for stopping by...

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