In the Dawn

In the dawn, bewildered the grey sky,
whether to opt the light orange
or the scarlet red or plain blue.
But then cogitating of the arising sun
the golden yellow dress, she dons 
With no vehicles' noise
and gadgets' sound around
even the breeze chooses
to blow in silence.
Amidst the stillness,
I barely stand on my terrace,
accumulating magical energy
from the rising sun,
consuming immaculate smell 
of the half bloomed flower
and immersing myself
in the heavenly tunes of silence.
And when my soul develops seeds 
and when I am about to disperse
awakens my senses, 
the mystical song of robin.


Mar 26  2021
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Pettit Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Nicely written.
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 2:17 PM
a lot of beautiful images here, Supraja. Love how you immersed yourself and are awakened at the end by the robin's mystical song.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 11:56 AM
sounds like a wonderful place to refresh one's soul.Blessings Richard.
Kannan Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Trifiatis Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 11:56 AM
A phantasmagoria of imagery creating the miracle of dawn! Divinely written, dearest Supraja!
Kannan Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment... Glad you liked it...
Buhagiar Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:43 AM
A delightful description of dawn. Your imagery is perfect. Loved it.
Kannan Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Thank you so much, Victor... Glad you liked it...
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:16 AM
So very beautiful is your dawn. A delightful write in pleasant imagery. Really well done.
Kannan Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Thank you so much... So glad you liked it... Thanks for stopping by...
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