In the Dark of Night

As you all peacefully sleep
My heart is awoken by the darkness of the night
I slumber through this empty house
For I carry in me a heavy heart
I light a candle, then a few
The movie of my past now flashes before my eyes
I stare at the empty walls, where pictures once hung
I hear the ghostly voices of lovers past
I hear the silence of dreams escaped
A sad faced mime touches my shoulder
Whispers of I feel your pain drift out the open window
Alone
In the dark of the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Love it, :)
Lariviere Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:13 PM
fantastique
Hicks Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:29 AM
I once had a dream that was very reminiscent of this feeling. I was in a house I never knew, lying in a bed with a lady whom I never saw her face... it was very eerie to say the least. By "empty" house I'm assuming you're meaning metaphorically. Nicely written...
Deschler Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:23 PM
I know this empty feeling, and I do feel your pain, Arthur.... These words are very haunting. I love the depth in them! Really great work, Arthur!.... I wrote something similar titled, "No Shoulder To Cry On".
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Hi there, I will have a look, and do not worry, what I am writing is mostly not about me, I just have a darker imaginative romantic side.
Nance Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 6:26 AM
a sad faced mime, very mysterious, a chilling write that speaks to the loneliness we all experience or fear to. You are not alone, I'm right there outside your window watching you.
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Well Tim did say I am not alone!!!! :) hugs
Lindley Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Deep, dark and mysterious. Powerfully written and awesome images evoked my friend! Rating this a very solid 7 ...
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Richard, soon I will have to mail you a cheque!!! Hope you are doing well!!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 10:05 AM
really deep beautifully penned know this feeling so well arthur
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Thank you liam, as we all know, all Irishmen are great poets, so a compliment from you is a compliment indeed!!! Cheers!
Bateman Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Arthur, a very beautiful write here. Your imagery captures the reader's attention immediately. It has a sad and haunting feeling, which makes your work all the more remarkable. Very well-done my friend. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Gary, appreciate your kind words, Haven't been around as much, so a lot of catching up to do here!!
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:25 PM
This is fabulous...you are not alone
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Never say that to someone who is paranoid!!! LOL
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:35 PM
deep and dark you improve with every pen Arthur loneliness runs in every line hugs
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Shadow, sorry for delay responding, haven't been around as much and just trying to catch up with everyone!! Hope you are doing well!!
Manassian Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:27 PM
A very haunting write, Arthur. We are kindred spirits on this night, it seems....Don't worry...better days are coming...
Vaso Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Glad you liked it as you inspired it!!!
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:52 PM
So deep, so dark, and so sad Arthur - I would hate to have such a feeling of loneliness and emptiness in my life. Hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:59 PM
oh we have a humidifier - we must have a lot of hot air in our worlds Arthur lol hugs jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks, thats just me and my crazy sense of humidifier
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