In the Courtroom

He forgot to remember her name but remembered to forget her claim. ============================== Contest:Chiasmus Date:10th March 2012
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Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Kash, just stopping by to say hello. Hope to see more poems from you soon. And I hope I will have time to see poems here tonight! Have a lovely day. Andrea
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 6:37 AM
While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Kash. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 12:08 AM
Sheer excellence!
Breidenthal Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Love your wit -- excellent one! Always, Laura
Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 10:46 AM
okay, past midnight, awhhh.. gotta have some snooze, lol... come visit! :)
Neels Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 10:00 AM
This is a good one Kash, witty too ;)
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 6:14 AM
LOL, good one, Kash! Many congrats on all your wins : )
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:39 AM
right now it's after midnight, Kash. but I should advance my clock to 1:38. When I awaken I will have lost an hour. I prefer in fall when the time "falls back" and I gain an hour of sleep. We say: Fall back, Spring forward!
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March 11, 2012 at 12:06 AM
wow, you did it really well, Kashinath, Like rhonda down here, I really struggled with mine. It's good you could come up with a nice SHORT one (mine was too long). I just saw the note you left "I am here" I was babysitting at the grandkids and couldn't do anything but leave the poem and see a few blogs and get off. even now, i have to hurry to bed because it's daylight's saving time, I'll wake up losing an hour of sleep. Do you have that in India??
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March 10, 2012 at 11:56 PM
This is a good one, Kash! My entry did not come easy for this contest. It's much harder than it looks. Best wishes to you in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:54 PM
you got the power, kashi.. what a courtroom scene with a touch of sly wit in it... best wishes and thanks for the heads up on demonic voice.. see??.. i really need to sleep earlier than 4am, lol!..:) huggles
Pettit Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:51 PM
A good example of what David is looking for in his contest. He won't forget this work.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 7:59 PM
really good one Kash.. I luv watching courtroom dramas .. good luck in contest with this grand expression fo Chiasmus poetry luv..
Guzzi Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:38 PM
hmmmm lots of forgetting going on here at soup LOL Big hugs from me! Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Well said and nicely done kash.- Luck in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 3:38 PM
A great one Kash. Good luck. Thanks for pointing out my typo. I had read it over and over without seeing it. Love, Joyce
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March 10, 2012 at 1:21 PM
Hah!! If this doesn't take first place, I'll eat my words. VERY funny and also very true! Winning wishes for you, Kash. Love, Carolyn
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