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In the Courtroom

He forgot to remember her name but remembered to forget her claim. ============================== Contest:Chiasmus Date:10th March 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2012 8:22:00 AM

Kash, just stopping by to say hello. Hope to see more poems from you soon. And I hope I will have time to see poems here tonight! Have a lovely day. Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 6:37:00 AM

While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/13/2012 12:08:00 AM

Sheer excellence!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/11/2012 11:46:00 AM

Love your wit -- excellent one! Always, Laura

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2012 10:46:00 AM

okay, past midnight, awhhh.. gotta have some snooze, lol... come visit! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/11/2012 10:00:00 AM

This is a good one Kash, witty too ;)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2012 6:14:00 AM

LOL, good one, Kash! Many congrats on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 12:39:00 AM

right now it's after midnight, Kash. but I should advance my clock to 1:38. When I awaken I will have lost an hour. I prefer in fall when the time "falls back" and I gain an hour of sleep. We say: Fall back, Spring forward!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 12:06:00 AM

wow, you did it really well, Kashinath, Like rhonda down here, I really struggled with mine. It's good you could come up with a nice SHORT one (mine was too long). I just saw the note you left "I am here" I was babysitting at the grandkids and couldn't do anything but leave the poem and see a few blogs and get off. even now, i have to hurry to bed because it's daylight's saving time, I'll wake up losing an hour of sleep. Do you have that in India??

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2012 11:56:00 PM

This is a good one, Kash! My entry did not come easy for this contest. It's much harder than it looks. Best wishes to you in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/10/2012 11:54:00 PM

you got the power, kashi.. what a courtroom scene with a touch of sly wit in it... best wishes and thanks for the heads up on demonic voice.. see??.. i really need to sleep earlier than 4am, lol!..:) huggles

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/10/2012 11:51:00 PM

A good example of what David is looking for in his contest. He won't forget this work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 7:59:00 PM

really good one Kash.. I luv watching courtroom dramas .. good luck in contest with this grand expression fo Chiasmus poetry luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/10/2012 6:38:00 PM

hmmmm lots of forgetting going on here at soup LOL Big hugs from me! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2012 5:06:00 PM

Well said and nicely done kash.- Luck in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/10/2012 3:38:00 PM

A great one Kash. Good luck. Thanks for pointing out my typo. I had read it over and over without seeing it. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2012 1:21:00 PM

Hah!! If this doesn't take first place, I'll eat my words. VERY funny and also very true! Winning wishes for you, Kash. Love, Carolyn