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In the Corners

When the lights dim
I will drift into your dreams
      lightly touching you

                                       Small whispers breathing
                                       in the corners of your soul
                                              bringing images
                                          

                                                                                 A slideshow of us
                                                                            with a faded yesterday
                                                                                memories not lost

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Holly Moore Date: 12/9/2012 9:41:00 AM You're such a romantic..another beautiful piece.I like the layout of the poem..Hugs, Holly Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/19/2012 7:47:00 AM Fine bittersweet work here! Keep 'em coming! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/16/2012 2:19:00 PM like these, Michael, love the profoundness... Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/13/2012 5:48:00 PM FEELING EVERY SET AND LINE OF EMOTIONAL BLISS OF YESTERDAY'S DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U PRESENT A PICTURE OF SOFT ECSTASY WITH CHARMING NOSTALGIA ,, OH I AM THERE .. JG FEELING IT ALL ..XOXO Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 11/12/2012 8:35:00 PM This is an amazing write, Michael. I love every single line, which is rare. Officially "faved" :) Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 11/12/2012 7:18:00 PM love the way you set this one up...great images in this piece as well...romantic poem for sure! Hugs Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/12/2012 6:01:00 PM So romantic and I enjoyed the page layout too! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 11/12/2012 4:49:00 PM a beautifully gentle, romantic senryu set you have here, michael, I especially like 1 and 3 :-) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/12/2012 4:34:00 PM well penned Michael... thanks for stopping by....... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/12/2012 3:26:00 PM In the Corners is such a lovely title for this set of romantic haiku, Michael. Very very nice. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/12/2012 10:52:00 AM This is truly amazing, what tenderness you exude within this powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly terrific and blazingly wonderful poem this afternoon! What a delightful and heartfelt piece you have written Michael, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/12/2012 9:23:00 AM SUPER WOW AND SO SWEET!! EXCELLENT SENRYUS MICHAEL! I love THEM ALL! A winner for sure! Thank you so much for stopping by and your very inspiring comments! I wish you all the best! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/12/2012 8:34:00 AM This is an amazing write from you Michael.Enjoyed very much. Login to Reply