Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

In the Corners

When the lights dim
I will drift into your dreams
      lightly touching you

                                       Small whispers breathing
                                       in the corners of your soul
                                              bringing images
                                          

                                                                                 A slideshow of us
                                                                            with a faded yesterday
                                                                                memories not lost

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Holly Moore December 9, 2012 at 9:41 AM You're such a romantic..another beautiful piece.I like the layout of the poem..Hugs, Holly

Matthew Anish November 19, 2012 at 7:47 AM Fine bittersweet work here! Keep 'em coming! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Harry Horsman November 16, 2012 at 2:19 PM like these, Michael, love the profoundness...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 13, 2012 at 5:48 PM FEELING EVERY SET AND LINE OF EMOTIONAL BLISS OF YESTERDAY'S DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U PRESENT A PICTURE OF SOFT ECSTASY WITH CHARMING NOSTALGIA ,, OH I AM THERE .. JG FEELING IT ALL ..XOXO

Heather Ober November 12, 2012 at 8:35 PM This is an amazing write, Michael. I love every single line, which is rare. Officially "faved" :)

Sandra Adams November 12, 2012 at 7:18 PM love the way you set this one up...great images in this piece as well...romantic poem for sure! Hugs

Debbie Guzzi November 12, 2012 at 6:01 PM So romantic and I enjoyed the page layout too! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot November 12, 2012 at 4:49 PM a beautifully gentle, romantic senryu set you have here, michael, I especially like 1 and 3 :-)

Joseph May November 12, 2012 at 4:34 PM well penned Michael... thanks for stopping by.......

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2012 at 3:26 PM In the Corners is such a lovely title for this set of romantic haiku, Michael. Very very nice.

Russell Sivey November 12, 2012 at 10:52 AM This is truly amazing, what tenderness you exude within this powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly terrific and blazingly wonderful poem this afternoon! What a delightful and heartfelt piece you have written Michael, Great Work!!

Len Gasun November 12, 2012 at 9:23 AM SUPER WOW AND SO SWEET!! EXCELLENT SENRYUS MICHAEL! I love THEM ALL! A winner for sure! Thank you so much for stopping by and your very inspiring comments! I wish you all the best! love/hugs, Leonora

Kash Poet November 12, 2012 at 8:34 AM This is an amazing write from you Michael.Enjoyed very much.