In the Corner

Here I stand in this godforsaken corner
under a forgotten, sun scorched land
beneath an expansive, desert sky.

I squint in the melting sun at high noon
my proud, deeply tanned face is lined
like a road map, carved and etched
from years of exposure to the elements.

A hot wind swiftly lifts and carries 
large tumbleweeds across the dusty
roads of the reservation.
I can see old paint peeling around the 
edges of a trading post sign,
rusted out cars with their hoods open
gathered like a weary convention
along the arroyo canyon,
and a lone roadrunner scurrying
among the saguaro cactus.

My ancestors were a proud people
once roaming freely over this vast
country. They loved the land and
respected it.
When the white man came, we
welcomed them, until we saw they
wanted to take our land from us.
Then we fought like warriors, but 
were soon outnumbered.

Now we have been relegated to
these largely barren swaths of land
on the outskirts of society.
Here we languish, yet we will
rise again once more.

I am a Native American and 
I have been put in the corner.



Written on 3/25/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/20/2018 4:32:00 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/19/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! :)
Date: 4/19/2018 5:50:00 PM
The issue only deteriorates but your stunning write elevates Laura. Louisiana held a strong Native presence; but you would never know that today.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/19/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, FJ. Yes, I wrote this around the time of the pipeline protest last year. Although it didn't end well for the Native Americans there, it certainly got the attention of America.
Date: 4/19/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for entering my contest with this gold medal winner. I love the description and strong native theme.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/19/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for my placement in your contest! I received an N/A on this in another contest, but am so glad you appreciate it and it's important message. I have enjoyed writing in the personification form in past poems. It is powerful to see life from a different perspective!
Date: 3/28/2017 11:50:00 AM
A rich history relegated to languish in despair, speaking from first hand knowledge. Good work Laura...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/28/2017 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I'm glad you liked this one. :)
Date: 3/27/2017 12:18:00 PM
A stinging review of how native lives have been processed, cataloged and boxed to benefit of some shady policies that they have been burdened with in the minds and laws of the governing bodies to be. This poem is a call to reexamine policy and take charge of their lives once more. Emile. #7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/27/2017 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Emile, for your wise insight to this ongoing issue here in the USA. I appreciate your rating, as well!
Date: 3/26/2017 2:57:00 PM
So true, Laura, and so well done. "Put in the corner" - that is exactly it. Unforgivable things, which among others, I don't think the U.S. is willing to address.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/26/2017 7:06:00 PM
True, Doug...thanks for your supportive comments..!
Date: 3/25/2017 8:56:00 PM
Oh wow Laura, excellent write. 7 good luck in the contest, not that you need it, this one is so well done, original and piercing. xomo!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/25/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen! I wanted to find a unique perspective on the "in the corner" theme for the contest. Glad you liked this. :)
Date: 3/25/2017 5:29:00 PM
Very remarkable! A top-notch poem.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/25/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for your very kind comments, Adeniji! I really appreciate it :)
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