In the Clouds

roiled green with envy roaring giants alter course… picnic blanket spread 26 Jul 2014 – PD’s “In the Clouds” Contest

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Faye Gibson

Date: 8/27/2014 8:34:00 PM

I like this one, David. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations for your win, David. Will the picnic be rained on?

David Mohn
Date: 8/26/2014 5:52:00 PM

Unfortunately yes, and a little ice for their drinks as well… thanks for the comment ?

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2014 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on a deserved win for a lovely write that also merits a top 7 rating. Lovely imagery, too. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 5:07:00 AM

Pleasing scene created with fine images, David. congrats

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/24/2014 8:20:00 PM

I'm ready for a picnic what's for lunch? Great winner David. Enjoyed your imagery:)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 4:31:00 PM

David, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:32:00 PM

David, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/26/2014 9:06:00 PM

Oh wow, this is very good! BG