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In the Clouds

roiled green with envy
roaring giants alter course…
picnic blanket spread

26 Jul 2014 – PD’s “In the Clouds” Contest

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Faye Gibson

August 27, 2014 at 8:34 PM

I like this one, David. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2014 at 5:21 PM

Congratulations for your win, David. Will the picnic be rained on?

David Mohn

August 26, 2014 at 5:52 PM

Unfortunately yes, and a little ice for their drinks as well… thanks for the comment ?

Paul Callus

August 25, 2014 at 10:50 AM

Congratulations on a deserved win for a lovely write that also merits a top 7 rating. Lovely imagery, too. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 25, 2014 at 5:07 AM

Pleasing scene created with fine images, David. congrats

Casarah Nance

August 24, 2014 at 8:20 PM

I'm ready for a picnic what's for lunch? Great winner David. Enjoyed your imagery:)

Pandita Sietesantos

August 24, 2014 at 4:31 PM

David, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 3:32 PM

David, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~