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Tainui, that great waka in the sky - the flight of the Koru carrying me into the far orbits seven miles high at altitude above the Tasman Sea. And on its metallic longrider wing I gazed the moon and stars, the setting sun. No man has seen a more glorious thing and for me no greater journey begun! For I was lost to a crisis of dearth, to my fits of rage and ravage of woe - to God in Heaven and demons on Earth till the last flight from desolation row. Thus here I am a longrider who flew on the wings of Tainui back to you. Written: July 1997

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