Constance La France Poet Tanka

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'in the Chilly Morn'

there is a chirping
in the leafless frozen woods,
I hold out my hand
and icy cold feathers land-
we both are trembling with awe.

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March 18, 2013- Edit


Poetry/Tanka/'in the chilly morn'
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Jeff Connelly January 28, 2020 at 3:49 PM Very nice. The image of birds and a human being coming together truly does make one's hand shake. Thank you Constance La France January 28, 2020 at 10:06 PM Jeff, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment _Constance

CayCay Godwin February 22, 2019 at 10:11 PM Very neatly tucked with feeling. I think it is a grand size for a small form delivery. Soup seems deserted, only numbers actively script, do u feel that? Any way, thing is, I am impressed with your write. All the best ... CayCay Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:27 AM CayCay, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment, soup deserted, yes that's a good way to describe it, I get that feeling too ~

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2019 at 5:04 PM this is precious, this little slice in time. Soupmail for ya. Constance La France February 23, 2019 at 9:28 AM Andrea, thanks for the lovely comment ~

Jack Horne February 21, 2019 at 11:54 AM wow, I just LOVE this - beautiful Constance La France February 21, 2019 at 2:39 PM Jack, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2019 at 8:44 AM - A wonderful experience ... beautifully written, D.H. :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France February 21, 2019 at 2:39 PM Anne-Lise, thanks for the beautiful and hugs ~