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there is a chirping in the leafless frozen woods, I hold out my hand and icy cold feathers land- we both are trembling with awe. ____________________ March 18, 2013- Edit Poetry/Tanka/'in the chilly morn' Copyright Protected, ID 13-1116-883-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 1/28/2020 3:49:00 PM
Very nice. The image of birds and a human being coming together truly does make one's hand shake. Thank you
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2020 10:06:00 PM
Jeff, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment _Constance
Date: 2/22/2019 10:11:00 PM
Very neatly tucked with feeling. I think it is a grand size for a small form delivery. Soup seems deserted, only numbers actively script, do u feel that? Any way, thing is, I am impressed with your write. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 2/23/2019 9:27:00 AM
CayCay, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment, soup deserted, yes that's a good way to describe it, I get that feeling too ~
Date: 2/22/2019 5:04:00 PM
this is precious, this little slice in time. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 2/23/2019 9:28:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the lovely comment ~
Date: 2/21/2019 11:54:00 AM
wow, I just LOVE this - beautiful
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:39:00 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 2/21/2019 8:44:00 AM
- A wonderful experience ... beautifully written, D.H. :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:39:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the beautiful and hugs ~

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