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In the Can

In the middle of the universe I stand, it's like being in a can Some where to which the average mind, can not comprehend You see in a can- you may swish with sound You may slosh up or down, you may go a round A round and a round, up or down Hearing or making sounds But within the can you are bound Liquid makes movement confound Because you will drowned it makes it loud Theres no where to escape any little sound So then you drowned of to much sound Now if any movement or sound isn't about The vaccume seal always keeps you Locked right here.. profound 13th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 11:10:00 AM
RUTH, Congratulations on your awesome win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/7/2015 7:06:00 AM
This is profound and unique in thought, Ruth. You sure manage to make the reader think. Congrats on your win. Have a nice weekend. // paul
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