In the Can
In the middle of the universe I stand, it's like being in a can
Some where to which the average mind, can not comprehend
You see in a can- you may swish with sound
You may slosh up or down, you may go a round
A round and a round, up or down
Hearing or making sounds
But within the can you are bound
Liquid makes movement confound
Because you will drowned it makes it loud
Theres no where to escape any little sound
So then you drowned of to much sound
Now if any movement or sound isn't about
The vaccume seal always keeps you
Locked right here.. profound
13th
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