In the Calm of Night

The radiance of day withdrawn An old moon a lamp up high; A barn owl keeps still across the lawn While orioles decide to fly. Robins nestle for the night, Sky paints a deep shade of blue Even the gust falls with the light; So we shall take our rest too. Evening is a memory now Secure in calm of dawn all right… Lullabies are heard from each bough In the glow of silver white. Poem 202 Contest for Brian Strand 9/16/2016
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Scars Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Lovely poem for a lovely lady...Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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September 16, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Love the sounds and sights of night birds! Your poetic hand expresses it well! Congrats on your win, Nette. :)
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September 16, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Makes me smile and say "Ahhh"! Lovely--Congrats on the win, Nette! Janice
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September 16, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Lovely image!
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September 16, 2016 at 7:44 AM
You create such a tranquil, serene feeling through your words and their lovely rhyme and rhythm, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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September 16, 2016 at 6:03 AM
I felt peaceful and serene reading your beautiful poem. Congrats, nette. Agnes
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September 15, 2016 at 9:55 PM
You do nature so well Nette, it shows your natural beauty and talent. Hugs Rick.
Parker Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:45 PM
hmmm....while reading your poem it gave me a sense of calm...a pleasure to read this one.....good luck my poetic friend...I'm going to fav this one to read when ever I feel stress
Scars Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 6:33 PM
beautiful poem for beautiful Nette...good luck :)-luloo
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September 15, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Beautiful, Nette. I'm always amazing by how you use imagery. Amazing, dear. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Ahhh a such a peaceful feeling I received from this lovely write filled with enchanting imagery Nette. I hope this entry does well in the contest. Beautiful! : ) 7
Leiser Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Your metaphors are always stunning, and the flow is beautiful, Nette! Good luck in the contest :)
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Beautiful imagery, Nette, every second pasted is a memory never thought of it like that. Thank you... good luck in the contest
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