Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

In the Blink

When will pretty?
      leaves of green,
bud with everlasting
      love, skies
splash intense cerulean?
   and rivulets of ivy
cascade, junipers
  show off their Spring?
outfits, roses
      purse their lips
of pink and red
    wink at him, shower?
her with adoration
   petals.  in the blink
of an eye, changes
will arrive, cold
tucked in heaven’s chest.

1/21/2020

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Caren Krutsinger January 21, 2020 at 9:19 PM The ending reminds me, live life now. Love everything you can now. Enjoy nature, so thank you my friend. Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 9:21 PM For sure! :)

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 11:04 AM Love the staccato rhythm, at least that's what I detect, you've employed in these lines of precious, precocious,... OK, why not?---perspicacious verse, Kim! The effect is audio-visually stunning, and really works for me!... The message can't be beat either. Already can't wait for Spring! Warm wishes, Gershon Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 1:10 PM The skies have been so dull! Give me greens and blues! Thank you, my precious friend!

Vijay Pandit January 21, 2020 at 9:11 AM A very pleasant read Kim--evocative of spring--exquisite imagery! Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 9:29 AM Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim