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In the Blink

When will pretty? leaves of green, bud with everlasting love, skies splash intense cerulean? and rivulets of ivy cascade, junipers show off their Spring? outfits, roses purse their lips of pink and red wink at him, shower? her with adoration petals. in the blink of an eye, changes will arrive, cold tucked in heaven’s chest. 1/21/2020

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Date: 1/21/2020 9:19:00 PM
The ending reminds me, live life now. Love everything you can now. Enjoy nature, so thank you my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 9:21:00 PM
For sure! :)
Date: 1/21/2020 11:04:00 AM
Love the staccato rhythm, at least that's what I detect, you've employed in these lines of precious, precocious,... OK, why not?---perspicacious verse, Kim! The effect is audio-visually stunning, and really works for me!... The message can't be beat either. Already can't wait for Spring! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 1:10:00 PM
The skies have been so dull! Give me greens and blues! Thank you, my precious friend!
Date: 1/21/2020 9:11:00 AM
A very pleasant read Kim--evocative of spring--exquisite imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

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