Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

In the Beginning

In the beginning there was man woman and bird and then there was see 
when the spirit of God moved inside them, they were all flown in for free 
At the very start God gave His will full hand but then he released free will 
some recognized their part in it and chose good will others chose to kill...
We are in a secondary world full of pain and confusion buzzing like busy bees 
and most of us have blinders on , we cannot see the forest for the trees;
Time evolves the Angels watch us carefully,  wondering when will we learn? 
some of us have make the effort to awaken, some of us still crash and burn. 
In the beginning the earth was quiet and the deer panted near the brook  
some of us dig deep in our souls, but then there are others who never look.

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Bill Baker September 9, 2022 at 4:08 PM In the solitude of peace and quiet come a continuing sprinkle of soulful blessings. Your words are encouraging to those of us that continue to look deeper and deeper for the essence of Truth and Love. Thanks for sharing from your heart and wisdom, my friend. Peace be with you, Bill