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In the Aquarium

Sponsor : Nette Onclaud
Contest: Zodiac Signs as Inspiration 
Placed : First :  July 26
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darkness cleaves fins tight
  underwater swims dreaming 
        emerge, cringes intact

syllabus rules fools
      tight is her grip on fat cat
          he rushes waves in dew morn

                 aquarium cracks
            psyche hacks quiet wisely
              avocado gold pisces fold images ~ 

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allusioncharactercolordeepextendedfree verse

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Paige Hind

July 19, 2026 at 9:19 PM

very cool, Ghairo love the opening line

Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2026 at 7:54 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In the Aquarium" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win................

Faye Gibson

July 18, 2026 at 7:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement; great work.

Alison A Smith

July 16, 2026 at 5:39 PM

The true work of a avid poetess. As I am Pisces born I feel an affinity with this write.

Joseph P. DiMino

July 16, 2026 at 10:54 AM

Wonderful imagery! For sure, real life and formal education are not the same. When one lets go, unloads the extra stuffing, what has been taught to him by tenured others, one starts to truly learn...and, perhaps~ truly live!

Hiya Sharma

July 16, 2026 at 7:29 AM

Woaaah the plethora of imagery that you've painted in such a few words, my dear Ghairo! I'm absolutely awestruck and amazed by the way you've written "aquarium cracks psyche hacks quiet wisely avocado gold pisces fold images ~" such artistic wordsmithery! Truly clever! "Syllable rules fools" that's quite intriguing! I'm scared for the cat though lol! Brilliantly done! Best wishes to you for the contest! Sending light and love ~ p.s. I just noticed the like feature on soup while commenting on your poem! How cool ?!

Ghairo Daniels

July 16, 2026 at 8:20 AM

ThkU for comment Poetess. I’ve returned your visit by commenting on your latest. Trust you’ll find it helpful. ( yeah ! The fat cat is not a cat at all ~ as you may know Pisces often over feed their loved ones. Lol. )

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