Notes About The Poem

Collaboration with Silent One. Last four lines are mine.

In the Absence of Complication

Where love reigns on the homestead,
everything purrs as it should.

Topaze sunlight pouring over emerald fields -
grueling days followed by serene nights.

In the absence of complication,
trials and tribulations become distant memories.

Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes -
inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind.



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on November 15, 2019 for contest COMPLETE THE POEM – IN THE ABSENCE OF COMPLICATION sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 2:52 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, much appreciated.
One Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 4:00 PM
you did a great collaboration.. just a little short... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Na Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Line
Gauthier Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 2:45 PM
A delightful collaboration for sure! Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Lovely. Best for a win. God bless you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gina.
Sergi Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Lost in thought of beauty and happiness Great Poem, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph. Most appreciated.
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Very nice collaboration! I enjoyed this :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:53 PM
nicely penned Line... I have not looked into the contests that are up and running but this reads very well...:) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Cholt Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Nice collaboration. It works very well. Best wishes to both of you for the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Thanks, WA.
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 3:20 PM
Nicely done Line. The lines all weave so well together if you had not mentioned the contest, I would not have known two different poets touched this. Wonderfully done. Best wishes in the contest
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Thanks, Chris, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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