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In That Moment

There was no choosing I had no thought of loving Then I heard you speak And smile just for me alone And I understood at last

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2010 8:41:00 PM

how profound this is, awesome, Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 6:41:00 AM

Wow, awesome write you captured that moment perfectly - you made me laugh with your comment on my antics ;) Hope your day is a stunner, love Wilma

De R

Date: 9/15/2010 11:45:00 AM

Love just strikes you, doesn't it...we all know the feeling...best wishes in the contest, Barbara:) Emilia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2010 9:48:00 AM

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Barbara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2010 10:15:00 PM

I sure love this little poem, Barbara! Luv, Andrea ps did I ever thank you for the book card? I sure hope so.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2010 6:53:00 PM

Excellent, fellow LNC. But if you understand, can you explain it to me? I'm still dancing in the dark. LOL Love, Carolyn

John Rhinem

Date: 9/14/2010 4:37:00 PM

Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day 'Dear, Lovely Barbara Gorelick,' Aside The City By The Bay Where Lives, 'Tender & Beautiful Love;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/14/2010 4:31:00 PM

Very beautiful..Take care~Deb

John Rhinem

Date: 9/14/2010 4:20:00 PM

Smile ~ "Very Beautiful Image & Thought 'Dear, Lovely & Precious Barbara Gorelick'" for, what greater things are there within this life than, "The Moments of Two Heart & Souls, 'Beginnings & Lifetimes of, Beautiful Love; Just Like Heaven!!!'" ~ It has been awhile dear lovely lady from the bay &, I hope that life has been treating "Your Treasures" so very wonderfully &, I am glad that I stopped by to, "Behold This 'Very Beautiful Pearl'" ~ ....Cont:)

Maya Zee

Date: 9/14/2010 4:03:00 PM

its quite good...