In That Moment

There was no choosing
I had no thought of loving
Then  I heard you speak
And smile just for me alone
And I understood at last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 8:41 PM
how profound this is, awesome, Harry
Neels Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Wow, awesome write you captured that moment perfectly - you made me laugh with your comment on my antics ;) Hope your day is a stunner, love Wilma
R Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Love just strikes you, doesn't it...we all know the feeling...best wishes in the contest, Barbara:) Emilia
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 9:48 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Barbara. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 10:15 PM
I sure love this little poem, Barbara! Luv, Andrea ps did I ever thank you for the book card? I sure hope so.
Devonshire Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Excellent, fellow LNC. But if you understand, can you explain it to me? I'm still dancing in the dark. LOL Love, Carolyn
Rhinem Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day 'Dear, Lovely Barbara Gorelick,' Aside The City By The Bay Where Lives, 'Tender & Beautiful Love;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
Wilson Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Very beautiful..Take care~Deb
Rhinem Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 4:20 PM
Smile ~ "Very Beautiful Image & Thought 'Dear, Lovely & Precious Barbara Gorelick'" for, what greater things are there within this life than, "The Moments of Two Heart & Souls, 'Beginnings & Lifetimes of, Beautiful Love; Just Like Heaven!!!'" ~ It has been awhile dear lovely lady from the bay &, I hope that life has been treating "Your Treasures" so very wonderfully &, I am glad that I stopped by to, "Behold This 'Very Beautiful Pearl'" ~ ....Cont:)
Zee Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 4:03 PM
its quite good...
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