In That Moment

In darkness now I lay.
Light from the window cascades into the room.
Filling my heart with thoughts of the one I could never 
forget.

lost for awhile  headed towards  the jagged rocks.
But like a  lighthouse beacon  I was guided by the reflection of your smile.

And though the road back was covered in pain.
I journyed through hell.
Cold and soaked by the agonys rain.
For by a thread from this life i did dangle.
held by a lovers promise caught within a tangle.

For in that moment when darkness was so ready to consume.
the heart refused to die.
As the warmth of your love did loom.

As i lay beaten trapped within this  room.
She comforts from afar.
Never to leave this heart for she is my
permanent loveless scare.

And in the confines of this room.
I reflect apon her face.
Knowing forever in my heart she will reside.
In that once hollow place.
words can never repay the dept for which I owe.
But this heart shall forever be yours incase you
ever need to know.

in that moment I knew Pain
Fear and Emptyness.
In that moment  I knew you were there.
And in my struggle I herd your voice.

And although pain did exist in lifes fight.
your love ment all.
As i reflect apon all which is you.
As the light cascades through  my window
into my empty room tonight.

Dedicated  To Julie loveless    
For we know all that others never will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/11/2009 8:29:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you . I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 11:46:00 AM
John this is a wonderful perfect write. I love you. Julie
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