In Symbiotic Balance

In portals of my mind I'm searching for peace and harmony thus far kept clandestine, secreted behind locked doors. Once undisguised, I'll be allowed some semblance of balance in my life to embrace every mountain peak I climb. How I yearn to be free of life's struggles... Symmetry between body and heart. Without boundaries or fences, to besmirch my true visions. They need to coexist in symbiotic tranquility, placid and always calm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Koplin Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 6:00 PM
I think that it was absolutely amazing Jenna, your talent shines through with this and many others! It's a first place in my book.
Logan Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Your comments make me smile, Mark. Your award is more than enough for me. Thanks!
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Jenna, I love the etheree form, if this is for a contest, good luck. Tom
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Hi Tom, it was N/A'd only minutes after being the last entered...leading me to believe.... I thank you for appreciating my lines.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Loved your etheree. A great wish to rid oneself of worries. Excellent.
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Thanks so much for liking this one, Victor. It was N/A'd
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Your poem has a lot of depth to it, Jenna, and the images of "symmetry" are well described. An excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:55 AM
I appreciate your review, Carolyn. I'm not sure it meets the requirements, but it's where my mind led....maybe astray! ;)
Sands Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Excellent. Very well written Jenna :)
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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