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In Symbiotic Balance

In portals of my mind I'm searching for peace and harmony thus far kept clandestine, secreted behind locked doors. Once undisguised, I'll be allowed some semblance of balance in my life to embrace every mountain peak I climb. How I yearn to be free of life's struggles... Symmetry between body and heart. Without boundaries or fences, to besmirch my true visions. They need to coexist in symbiotic tranquility, placid and always calm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/21/2021 6:00:00 PM
I think that it was absolutely amazing Jenna, your talent shines through with this and many others! It's a first place in my book.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/24/2021 6:08:00 AM
Your comments make me smile, Mark. Your award is more than enough for me. Thanks!
Date: 3/20/2021 12:36:00 PM
Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Jenna, I love the etheree form, if this is for a contest, good luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 12:39:00 PM
Hi Tom, it was N/A'd only minutes after being the last entered...leading me to believe.... I thank you for appreciating my lines.
Date: 3/20/2021 12:31:00 PM
Loved your etheree. A great wish to rid oneself of worries. Excellent.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 12:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for liking this one, Victor. It was N/A'd
Date: 3/20/2021 10:41:00 AM
Your poem has a lot of depth to it, Jenna, and the images of "symmetry" are well described. An excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 11:55:00 AM
I appreciate your review, Carolyn. I'm not sure it meets the requirements, but it's where my mind led....maybe astray! ;)
Date: 3/20/2021 10:10:00 AM
Excellent. Very well written Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/20/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.

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