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In Support of a Ps Poet

Poets were asked to write for a mystery contest and I accepted the challenge to go on that quest to open any book and blindly point a single digit at 5 words or more that wouldn't make me fidget What was the chance that my very first word would be one that I considered rather absurd? The contest theme is novel, and different is fun This poem is half finished. My entry nearly done. Thanks for reading each whimsically rhymed line I chose more than 5 words, but one less than 9 So, when my finger pointed at the word, 'wait.' I knew it was a message to stop at number 8. Tomorrow, I will see if any comments were made If not, my aspiration of placing will begin to fade Win or lose, I'm glad to give support to a PS poet with an entry in a contest, hoping I didn't blow it. October 1, 2020 ~ Mystery Word Find Contest Sponsor: Caren Krustsinger Given the choice to choose 5 or more words, I blindly chose: fidget, chance, absurd, novel, reading, wait, tomorrow, and aspiration

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Date: 10/29/2020 1:58:00 PM
Jenna, I'm back to say Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/28/2020 8:17:00 AM
Some righteous ink Jenna! Congratulations on your top place win!
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Date: 10/27/2020 10:01:00 PM
Jenna, this is so very clever and playful! Congratulatios on your win!
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Date: 10/27/2020 9:50:00 PM
Hi Jenna, You did a great job with words that you blindly picked. I enjoyed the “ fun tone and vibe” of this piece. Well done. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/27/2020 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on this very cleverly composed poem!! Real fun and light hearted!
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Date: 10/24/2020 1:15:00 PM
Well inked my friend! You had better refill your pen after that gem, Great job!!
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:30:00 AM
Hi Jenna, Personally I see this as a top win, you have created, a wonderful poem with your talented pen and ink Caren likes fun and your poem is houmoros . Good luck my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2020 1:57:00 AM
Thanks for the encouraging comments, Jennifer. I'm not sure it will be to her liking. It's a bit different, but it's where my mind led me.
Date: 10/2/2020 4:46:00 PM
This is a fun contest, and your entry has a real fun tone to it. You have a real flair for finding interesting rhymes - my faves are digit/fidget, and poet/blow it. I also liked how you wrote about the process of writing it, kind of like breaking the 4th wall on the stage. Best wishes for a win ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 10/3/2020 8:48:00 PM
Jenna, here's an interesting wikipedia page on the fourth wall (and breaking it) if you're interested: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fourth_wall. Blessings ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2020 3:31:00 AM
What an interesting phrase...breaking the 4th wall on the stage. I've never heard of that. Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts, and your favorite lines, John.
Date: 10/2/2020 7:07:00 AM
What a fun write Jenna. Clever and witty! Best wishes for the contest! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:30:00 AM
Hi Linda, and thanks so much for your great comments.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:52:00 AM
- Jenna, this is so great ... I love it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thanks so much for your wishes in placing in the contest, Anne-Lise.
Date: 10/2/2020 5:59:00 AM
This was so cool, Jenna, very clever and fun. I think the sponsor will like it. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:29:00 AM
I'm hoping Caren likes it. If not, it was still a fun poem to write.
Date: 10/2/2020 3:36:00 AM
Souper Cool!!... Great idea, very neatly executed. Top marks and an imminent Win is yours, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:28:00 AM
I'm happy you like it so much. Thanks, Sigrid.
Date: 10/2/2020 1:15:00 AM
what a fabulous rhyme from your chosen words, and a lovely entry for the contest. i think Caren will love this one Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:27:00 AM
I thought about what to do with such a conglomerate of words, then it just took on a life of its own. lol Thanks, Jan.
Date: 10/1/2020 7:25:00 PM
Really well done. So seamless. G.L. in the contest, Jenna! Life and Light, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind thoughts, as ever, Gershon.
Date: 10/1/2020 6:36:00 PM
Jenna, I enjoyed your awesome poem built upon the 8 words randomly chosen! Such an endearing and wonderful piece. I especially loved your third stanza and your great last line.. You definitely “didn’t blow it” :)) I look forward to seeing this high on the winner’s list. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/2/2020 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. It was a fun challenge, so win or lose, I'm smiling by seeing so many positive comments.

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