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this stream across the street runs deep like my passion towards you i watch as it flows downstream brushing the edges of banks tenderly like hands exploring the unknown i get lost in the current the same way i'd get lost in your eyes as you gazed into mine inquisitively this stream from my eyes runs deep perhaps with the same depth as the creek across the street

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Date: 6/12/2020 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Been there, a stream of tears. Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:33:00 AM
So beautiful well-articulated feelings! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 12/14/2019 7:41:00 AM
Like rivers love runs it course, like a rivers bed it evolves over time, and though both run the same direction, what remains beyond the rivers bend, yet remains unknown...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/14/2019 2:58:00 PM
so very true Robert...
Date: 12/14/2019 4:50:00 AM
A beautiful connection of love and a stream current; but always remember Sandra, you can't step in the same stream twice.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/14/2019 2:57:00 PM
so true in a way...you can but each experience may be slightly different...
Date: 12/13/2019 9:55:00 PM
I love the parallels you made with the stream. Poetic hugs.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Juliet...we have many streams in the area...sometimes they can be relaxing to watch, other times their fury amazes me... hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 5:35:00 PM
Very nice. Dont you love how we can express how were felling with landmarks and other objects. A lot of things operate like our mind and heart. Thanks for sharing
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Greg, i sure do...i often compare nature to feelings... just where my muse likes to travel... :) hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 5:30:00 PM
Sigh...wow my friend, this one took the chill off from your last poem and warmed my heart wonderfully. This is absolutely beautiful. May happiness always rain on you Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris...i wish happiness would rain on me and not the skies so much... i appreciate all your kind words my friend...have a great weekend... hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 3:05:00 PM
Breathtaking, Sandra, in every way. Love this... a fave <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend... especially for the fave.. it came out of nowhere today... :) hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 1:54:00 PM
Loved how you connected the stream across the street to stream from eyes..moments gazing inquisitively.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay... the streams are high with all this rain this year...it never seems to stay nice for more than a day or two... it made for good inspiration though... hugs :)
Date: 12/13/2019 12:23:00 PM
Your second stanza really got to me Sandra. A metaphoric meal for breakfast! I love it! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie...it's raining again, was trying to turn the somber day into brighter thoughts... hugs XoXo :)
Date: 12/13/2019 12:14:00 PM
so soothing to read, my eyes see the words, and my heart hears them. x:-)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thank you my beautiful friend... my muse is all over the place lately... :) hugs

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