Andrea Dietrich Poet Monorhyme

In Springtime's Brilliancy

In springtime's brilliancy, 
I wandered free
and leisurely 
beside a tranquil sea.
Birds’ melody - 
a sweet discovery!
A willow tree 
with leaves all silvery
became a canopy 
to shelter me
as happily, 
I wrote my poetry.

for the 'ALL YOURS (Mar 29)' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Darren White January 15, 2017 at 10:10 AM If you seek company, in that sweet tree, choose me, because I'm frolic as can be! Congratulations

Jannie Breedt January 13, 2017 at 11:40 PM Congratulations Andrea. Willows are the best to lie under

Raven Howell January 13, 2017 at 9:11 PM Andrea, you are truly prolific! Your poetry is beautiful...

Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 3:35 PM Great place to write poetry Andrea. Might have to settle for a few pot plants and a pond myself - at least when it gets warmer. Congratulations on your win! :-)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 11, 2017 at 3:27 AM Big Smiles. A very tranquil poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:16 PM That is such a lovely image which you project, Andrea! Congratulations on a deserved podium finish. // paul

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:45 PM Mmmm...I envy your silvery canopy. Congratulations on your win.

John Hamilton January 9, 2017 at 8:33 PM Great write Andrea, congrats on a fine win!

Matthew Anish January 9, 2017 at 9:15 AM Nice poem with clever rhymes! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick January 9, 2017 at 8:20 AM I like the rhythm and flow of this one..Reads like a rhyming winner..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Supraja Kannan January 9, 2017 at 2:17 AM So so beautiful... A big 7...

Agnes Krampe January 8, 2017 at 8:11 PM Beautifully done. I love how you vary where the inner rhyme is placed. Good luck in the contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 8, 2017 at 2:53 PM I hope this poem wins the contest. Well done.

Tim Smith January 8, 2017 at 2:02 PM A tranquil poem Andrea.

Jan Allison January 8, 2017 at 8:34 AM I can see this at the top of the list Andrea Such fabulous rhyme and it flows brilliantly!:-) hugs Jan xx7