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In Southview

In Southview, ancestors now sleep
Those who have gone before God keeps
Silent now watch at heaven's gate
Though they've touched elbows with the great
When they see me for joy they'll leap

Left here on earth sometimes I weep 
While visiting love ones buried deep
Someday they'll arise up so straight
                                In Southview

I might be there when Jesus reaps
It could be I'll be with them asleep
Or there to visit and just wait
Hear the blast, see them rise lightweight
Then I'll be snatched with God's sweet sheep
                                                In Southview 

Southview is a cemetery where we have a plot and many of our family members are already buried..My father's mother and father were the first graves in the cemetery to be filled..
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Haight Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Such a lovely Rondeau poem, Sara. Uplifting and calming, nonetheless, a sad part of life we all have to face. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
George   Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Many congrats on your win, Sara...and thank you for your comments on my 'AMERICA'. Sincerely, Elaine George
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 4:29 AM
Sad but uplifting Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate you reading my work..Sara
Canerdy Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:29 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Sara. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Janice,Thank your for reading and considering my work..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
Enriquez Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Dear Sara: Nicely done this verse piece. It spells birth, life, death... Re-birth? Leon
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Leon, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Yes, re-birth..Sara
Daniel Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Excellent rondeau, Sara:) I am always amazed by this form, you have used it excellently:)
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Jo, Thanks for the smiley face..I appreciate your uplifting visit..Your presence is encouraging..Sara
Sivey Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 6:50 PM
What a fantastic write this one truly is my friend! You have expressed your sentimental heart with this poem here this evening! What a promising poem, one full of hope for the future, to see loved ones again! I sincerely loved this Rondeau! What a remarkable poem, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Russell, Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate you dropping by..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Love this, Sara! Fave!
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Kim, I am honored that you would fav this one..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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