In Some Ways

Different worlds, you and I
Is it a blessing or a curse
All the luxuries of modern living
In some ways times are worse
The old man spoke of younger days
Time was so much simpler then
He thought about the hardships
And the struggles way back when
The old man said I’ll tell you a story
Of how things were long before
Of days when families had so little
In some ways, so much more
He told him of the friendships
That had lasted through the years
And he spoke of people dead and gone
And the young boy saw his tears
He talked about the innocence
When love was on the wing
Looking out his back yard window
For the first robin in the spring
Playing baseball in an empty lot
Sometimes fighting with his brother
Picking flowers for a May Altar
For Our Lord’s Blessed Mother
He talked about his mother’s eyes
And how she looked when he upset her
Times were very difficult
In some ways, so much better
He spoke of days when children played
Until after dark not knowing fear
Of monkey bars and merry go rounds
As he shed another tear
He knew all the shop owners by name
He had never seen a mall
Riding his bicycle all summer
Rolling in piles of leaves in the fall
The young boy smiled and said call it progress
We underestimated the cost
In some ways I have gained so much
And in some ways, I lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A   Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Love the story above...pd
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 2:30 PM
An excellent and perceptive write as always...boy I remember monkey bars LOL I got my tongue stuck to one at 8 in a Maine winter playfround! (Never could keep my mouth shut LOL) Light & Love
George   Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 5:21 PM
Dear Vince, Thank you for your participation in my contest and congratulations on your win. This poem touched my heart. Love, Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 8:00 AM
Hi Vince, Congrats on your win in Laine's contest "Tell Me A Story", very well deserved! Love Light Patty
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December 18, 2009 at 5:26 AM
Congrats Vince on your winning poem in Lainie's contest... well deserved win for an excellent write.. I just was notified that my entry won an honorable mention although not listed "Bird With the Broken Wing".. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie... thankxxx for your blog comments... enjoyed your input to make blogs fun.... "Sweetheart"
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December 18, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Congrats on your success in Elaine's contest Vince.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 6:26 PM
I loved this entry when I first read it. It holds the same thoughts and values that I long for and wish were still alive today. Congratulations on your win, Vince. A Merry Christmas to you and your family. God Bless. Carrie
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December 17, 2009 at 1:32 PM
This old man had experiences that made him very wise, Vince. And the young boy's failure to grasp his insights is not surprising. Values have certainly changed as today's children are raised in a more sheltered and affluent manner. Congratulations on your success in Elaine's contest, Vince! Much love, Carolyn
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December 15, 2009 at 11:10 AM
i absolutly ADORE this piece. thank you sooo much for sharing it ^^ xo Always Rainbow
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Very nostalgia write. Those days were better in some ways and worse in others. Bon't want to go back to drawing water from the well and some others. Keep writing. Sara
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November 10, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Sometimes I think back to how it was and how it is today and think it was better in yesteryear. We forget how to smile, how to shake a hand, how to be a person. We have become computer and tv junkies and distrustful of the outside world. So so sad. Excellent Vince. God Bless Phyl
Richards Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 7:28 AM
In a world that has changed so much... where kids today have no idea the freedom of playing outside after dark, where neighbor knowing their neighbor seems to be rare, where people were content to sit on their front porches instead of in front of a television or computer...yes.....we have lost so much. I hear your heart in this poem. Well done~ Love, Carrie
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November 10, 2009 at 6:26 AM
I relate to this piece in every way..wonderful write..the simple form is just right for this poem. BG
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November 10, 2009 at 6:06 AM
A touching write that reminds me how much I appreciate sitting and talking to my grandmother. I love to listen to the stories that she has to share of her youth and the many things she has seen come to pass. It is a precious gift to have the chance to listen and learn from her. Thank you for the reminder to call her today and tell her how much I love and appreciate her. A great write full of so much truth and vivid imagery my friend. Smiles from Lolita
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