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In days of yore when I was four, in my memory I'm sure
 there was nothing that you could buy called low fat
you got meat from a cow, and pork from a sow,
pound of lamb from NZ and that was that.
Butter from a pack, there was nothing that it lacked, 
spread it thickly and then top it off with jam
or on it's own when times were hard,
and cook your chips in a pound of lard
and deep fry lots of lovely fritters made of Spam.
On the high days and the holy finish off with roly poly
burn it off by playing footy in the yard,
as we kids all stuffed our faces the majority of cases
found that doing up our laces wasn't hard.
So I think it rather strange how the times they've slowly changed
in our best interests to make us really thin
that the products we are buying really must be surely lying
as so many are now bursting out their skins.
In the papers every morning there's a scientific warning
of the problems that we store up for ourselves
as we go off on a jolly with our supermarket trolley
desperately trying to empty all the shelves.
As I sit and watch the fuss as they struggle on the bus
using scooters sticks and frames to get along
all I'm seeing is human beings and before my thoughts start fleeing
in my head they  ask  'where did it all go wrong'?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/5/2015 5:20:00 PM
Eating natural stuff can't be good for us Viv; I mean, how would the manufacturers and supermarkets survive without additives, food colourings, and use by dates... and fast food outlets. Nicely written Viv - Lindsay
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Date: 10/5/2015 4:00:00 PM
HA... you have nailed this modern dilemma with a great and witty write. Interestingly though... my daughter is a Dr. of Exercise Physiology worked until Prof./Dr. Tim Noakes-- famous for his controversial discovery that fat is actually good to eat and that high cholesterol is a pharmaceutical gravy train. It's not fatty foods, but sugar that's a killer. So... I say chomp away on those fatty pork chops and savor full dairy cream for sure :) ~~X~~
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Date: 9/29/2015 7:17:00 PM
Well penned and loved the title too. I think the only things we really like are eating, sex, and sleeping. Everything else we do just enables us do those things, or something like that. I'm not sure where writing comes in but it has very low calories.
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Date: 9/29/2015 11:41:00 PM
Thanks David, yes I must agree with you on poetry keeping one slim- my fingers are quite spindly- all that typing, probably the only part of my body getting a real workout every day :) . Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/22/2015 10:52:00 PM
I see someone mentioned Dr. Atkins. If you like MEAT, that is awesome. I am on it but I just crave carbs so much. Anyway, I will stick it out(hopefully not my tummy) A good foodie poem this is!
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Date: 9/23/2015 12:10:00 AM
IMHO I don't think you need the Atkin's diet, Andrea. To quote the inventor of the Joel diet, ' I love you just the way you are'. Viv x
Date: 9/22/2015 6:24:00 PM
Good to see you got your lamb from New Zealand (keep eating that, Dr Atkins says it's good). Lifestyles have changed so much, we are our own worst enemies.
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:12:00 PM
A friend of mine has been told he is the wrong weight for his height- he says he's not overweight, just undertall.... Thanks for dropping by, Mark. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/22/2015 9:56:00 AM
Viv, wonderfully penned and you hit on a terrible epidemic of bad eating habits, it is thought that too much time is spent in front of televisions and computers and cell phones and not enough on living, and thanks for visiting my poem, budgie pete, that was fun to write ~~
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:15:00 PM
Yes, BW, technology is like food and alcohol- everything in moderation. Thanks for popping in. Viv x
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