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In Six Months Time

Spring and Fall join hands
squeezing sadness from our hearts
     green and threadbare leaves

                    11/11/2021

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Gordon Mcconnell

November 14, 2021 at 1:27 PM

Such a meaningful piece Kim with super brevity and congrats on the POTD.

Besma Riabi Dziri

November 14, 2021 at 1:06 PM

All the seasons echo their feel on our very souls.. and colour our inner thoughts and selves.. So wonderful is your rendition! Deserving all the honour! Congratulations on your POTD, Kim! A great pleasure to read you! My deepest regards and blessings.

November 13, 2021 at 10:36 PM

Congratulations Kim on your POTD. So much meaning in so few words. Blessings~ Debra

November 14, 2021 at 4:43 AM

Thank you, Debra!

Anitha Jayasankar

November 13, 2021 at 10:03 PM

So meaningful a Senryu .. with beautiful imagery dear Kim... Hearty congrats on your well deserved POTD... Hugs... ~ Ani

November 14, 2021 at 4:42 AM

Thank you, Anitha!

November 13, 2021 at 8:18 PM

wow... great imagery , Kim... well deserved POTD... Hugs dear friend

November 14, 2021 at 4:41 AM

Thank you, Eve!

November 13, 2021 at 6:52 PM

Your thoughts curl softly around me. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. I can feel your heart. You have been through so much, my dear friend. Hugs to you. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

November 14, 2021 at 4:41 AM

Thank you, Brandy <3

November 13, 2021 at 5:04 PM

Squeezing the sadness out... has resulted in happiness and delight! Congrats, Kim, on POTD! Seasons for Reasons, Gershon

November 13, 2021 at 6:39 PM

There are seasons for reasons! Thank you, Gershon!

Constance La France

November 13, 2021 at 3:20 PM

Kim, a nice Senryu and congratulations on the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

November 13, 2021 at 6:35 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Jennifer Proxenos

November 13, 2021 at 12:10 PM

Back with Congrats Kim for your POTD, Hugs Jennifer.

November 13, 2021 at 6:34 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

November 13, 2021 at 11:46 AM

What a beauty Kim, congratulations on potd!

November 13, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Thank you, Mark!

November 13, 2021 at 9:51 AM

A beautiful Senryu Kim, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle

November 13, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Thank you, Belle!

L Milton Hankins

November 13, 2021 at 9:09 AM

Lovely writing, Kim. Congratulations on your well-deserved P. O. T. D.!

November 13, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Thank you, Milton!

November 13, 2021 at 7:45 AM

Seasons of melancholy memories Congrats on POTD Kim

November 13, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

November 13, 2021 at 7:36 AM

There is a depth here that both the poet and Creator intended in their works. Congratulations on POTD :)

November 13, 2021 at 7:45 AM

Thank you for your sweet comment :)

November 13, 2021 at 7:29 AM

I am happy to see this as POTD . Congratulations Kim! :)

November 13, 2021 at 7:44 AM

Thank you, Heidi! :)

November 13, 2021 at 7:17 AM

Congratulations Kim on your POTD honors! You filled your piece with many beautiful images and thoughts! Happy Saturday!!

November 13, 2021 at 7:44 AM

Thank you, Mike! A new day…happy Saturday!

November 13, 2021 at 7:01 AM

Beautiful contrasts and emotions stirred. So much said in a few words . Congratulations Kim on POTD! Hugs , Susan :)

November 13, 2021 at 7:44 AM

Thank you, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 13, 2021 at 6:54 AM

Congratulations on your POTD Win. You Told a "Wonderful" story in just 3 lines. Have a blessed day................................

November 13, 2021 at 7:43 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Unseeking Seeker

November 13, 2021 at 6:28 AM

Stark contrast of earth life, congrats on POTD, Kim

November 13, 2021 at 7:43 AM

Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

November 13, 2021 at 6:22 AM

A well deserved POTD. Hugs.

November 13, 2021 at 7:43 AM

Thank you, Victor!

November 13, 2021 at 6:19 AM

..."green and threadbare leaves".. brilliant description of the cycle of life....

November 13, 2021 at 7:43 AM

Thank you, John!

November 13, 2021 at 6:14 AM

Back with congratulations Kim on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom

November 13, 2021 at 7:42 AM

Thank you! :)

November 13, 2021 at 4:41 AM

Congrats Kim on poem of the day. Green and threadbare leaves--clever metaphoric lines!

November 13, 2021 at 5:45 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

November 13, 2021 at 2:22 AM

I knew these lines would be well received. I'm happy to see them as potd, Kim.

November 13, 2021 at 5:45 AM

Thank you, Jenna! :)

November 12, 2021 at 1:15 PM

Apropos of the seasons we know. Beautifully penned, my friend. Here's to the changing of the seasons :) gw

November 13, 2021 at 5:44 AM

Thank you, Gershon!

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