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In Six Months Time

Spring and Fall join hands
squeezing sadness from our hearts
     green and threadbare leaves

                    11/11/2021

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/14/2021 1:27:00 PM

Such a meaningful piece Kim with super brevity and congrats on the POTD.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/14/2021 1:06:00 PM

All the seasons echo their feel on our very souls.. and colour our inner thoughts and selves.. So wonderful is your rendition! Deserving all the honour! Congratulations on your POTD, Kim! A great pleasure to read you! My deepest regards and blessings.

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/13/2021 10:36:00 PM

Congratulations Kim on your POTD. So much meaning in so few words. Blessings~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2021 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Debra!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/13/2021 10:03:00 PM

So meaningful a Senryu .. with beautiful imagery dear Kim... Hearty congrats on your well deserved POTD... Hugs... ~ Ani

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2021 4:42:00 AM

Thank you, Anitha!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2021 8:18:00 PM

wow... great imagery , Kim... well deserved POTD... Hugs dear friend

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2021 4:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/13/2021 6:52:00 PM

Your thoughts curl softly around me. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. I can feel your heart. You have been through so much, my dear friend. Hugs to you. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2021 4:41:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2021 5:04:00 PM

Squeezing the sadness out... has resulted in happiness and delight! Congrats, Kim, on POTD! Seasons for Reasons, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:39:00 PM

There are seasons for reasons! Thank you, Gershon!

Constance La France

Date: 11/13/2021 3:20:00 PM

Kim, a nice Senryu and congratulations on the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:35:00 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/13/2021 12:10:00 PM

Back with Congrats Kim for your POTD, Hugs Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:34:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Mark Koplin

Date: 11/13/2021 11:46:00 AM

What a beauty Kim, congratulations on potd!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Mark!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/13/2021 9:51:00 AM

A beautiful Senryu Kim, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Belle!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/13/2021 9:09:00 AM

Lovely writing, Kim. Congratulations on your well-deserved P. O. T. D.!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Milton!

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2021 7:45:00 AM

Seasons of melancholy memories Congrats on POTD Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/13/2021 7:36:00 AM

There is a depth here that both the poet and Creator intended in their works. Congratulations on POTD :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thank you for your sweet comment :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/13/2021 7:29:00 AM

I am happy to see this as POTD . Congratulations Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi! :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/13/2021 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations Kim on your POTD honors! You filled your piece with many beautiful images and thoughts! Happy Saturday!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Mike! A new day…happy Saturday!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/13/2021 7:01:00 AM

Beautiful contrasts and emotions stirred. So much said in a few words . Congratulations Kim on POTD! Hugs , Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2021 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD Win. You Told a "Wonderful" story in just 3 lines. Have a blessed day................................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:43:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/13/2021 6:28:00 AM

Stark contrast of earth life, congrats on POTD, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:43:00 AM

Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2021 6:22:00 AM

A well deserved POTD. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:43:00 AM

Thank you, Victor!

John Lawless

Date: 11/13/2021 6:19:00 AM

..."green and threadbare leaves".. brilliant description of the cycle of life....

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:43:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/13/2021 6:14:00 AM

Back with congratulations Kim on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 7:42:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2021 4:41:00 AM

Congrats Kim on poem of the day. Green and threadbare leaves--clever metaphoric lines!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/13/2021 2:22:00 AM

I knew these lines would be well received. I'm happy to see them as potd, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, Jenna! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/12/2021 1:15:00 PM

Apropos of the seasons we know. Beautifully penned, my friend. Here's to the changing of the seasons :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 5:44:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon!

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