In Shimmering White

The mountain wears a white lace shawl,

    Winter has dressed her in shimmering white.

Above our heads, she stands so tall,

    Beautifully displayed in morning light.

Warming our hearts, this most picturesque sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2011 11:13:00 PM
beautiful.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2011 5:05:00 AM
Splendid visuals Francine.. luv that first line with the lace shawl.. very imaginative and full of grand imagery my friend.. good luck with your newest contest Flowers... will be working on an entry today for u... Free Verse is a challenge for me ..but... for u .. will attempt to thrill u.. luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2011 1:42:00 AM
Beautiful scene painted,Francine.Excellent write.Thanks for congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2011 10:39:00 PM
lWhat a pretty poem Francine. Winter can be beautiful. Thank you for my no. 4 win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2011 10:33:00 PM
If you were situated just a little south, I would say you were describing Mt. Rainier. This is a very descriptive quintain.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/25/2011 10:05:00 PM
What a pretty little quintain. Was this just practice for you with the form? I can't recognize it in a contest. I enjoyed this one, Francine and thanks again for the win in your contest. I read all of them. wonderful contest!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter