Notes About The Poem
"In Shadows Here, I Wait Unseen" was inspired by a quiet moment of reflection on the act of creation and the often-uncertain journey of a piece of art into the world. Imagine a book, a collection of poems, sitting on a library shelf, nestled amongst the works of literary giants. It’s a novice's work, a hopeful offering, yet it remains untouched, unseen.
This villanelle is a personification of that book, a voice whispering from the shadows, questioning its place and its relevance. It explores the universal longing to be seen and valued, to find an audience, and to contribute meaningfully to the world. It’s a reflection on the enduring power of poetry and the hope that, even in a world filled with noise, there are still those who seek and appreciate the beauty of words.
The cyclical nature of the villanelle form, with its repeating lines and refrains, mirrors the book's quiet persistence, its patient wait for discovery. I hope this poem resonates with anyone who has ever felt unseen, and that it encourages a renewed appreciation for the quiet voices that yearn to be heard.
In Shadows Here, I Wait Unseen
Listen to poem:
In shadows here, I wait unseen,
Placed by Dewey's ordered scheme,
Does poetry still hold its sheen?
Shakespeare, Poe, their works convene,
Their pages turned, their words agleam,
In shadows here, I wait unseen.
Angelou, Frost, their verses keen,
Yet I remain, in silent dream,
Does poetry still hold its sheen?
A novice's book, with cover sheen,
To join the greats, to gleam, to dream,
In shadows here, I wait unseen.
Do readers still find joy, find meaning?
Or has the world lost its esteem?
Does poetry still hold its sheen?
Oh, seeker, come and make me seen,
Discover me, end this lonely dream,
In shadows here, I wait unseen,
Does poetry still hold its sheen?
Copyright © Joel Hawksley | Year Posted 2025
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