In Search of Love Concluded

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He trudged the woods aimlessly.
The birch trees were devoid of leaves.
Cruel winds blew and wrecked havoc.
He did not even gather the twigs that fell,
Little caring what warmth they would shed when lit.  
His body trembled with icy atmosphere.
Alas he woke up too late.

But now with spring, he feels the warmth again.
Something burns in his heart.
He is determined to find her.
Easier said than done.
He asks for her but receives cold shoulders.

Then he remembered she often worked on a mountain resort,
During the warm days of spring and summer.
So up he went hoping against all hope.
But she was there, a smile on her face.
“The usual dry red wine?” she asked.
“Of course, laced with a kiss.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/22/2023 7:05:00 AM
I like this ending. Very romantic in nature. I enjoyed it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Kempty's definition as an adjective: course....Sara
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Date: 7/12/2022 2:10:00 AM
Hi Victor, you are so full of adventure and romance ! Quite remarkable at your age ! Enjoyed!
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Date: 4/12/2021 1:37:00 PM
Ah, that’s lovely Victor, the course of love never did run smooth, if love is true it’s too good to lose... Belle
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Date: 4/3/2021 12:56:00 PM
Hi Victor, you write such beautiful love stories, I can guess a great many of them are based on your long and happy marriage with your loving wife. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/2/2021 9:56:00 PM
love the last stanza, Victor, hugs eve
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Date: 4/2/2021 5:16:00 PM
A poetic story enjoyed it and the ending was perfect!!
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Date: 4/2/2021 1:21:00 PM
Hi Victor, A happy ending to a well penned verse. Have a wonderful day and a Happy Easter:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/2/2021 1:46:00 AM
Now, that's a perfect ending, loved it absolutely, Victor:)
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Date: 4/1/2021 5:05:00 PM
A lovely penned poem. Well done Victor, I wish you and yours a happy Easter.
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:20:00 PM
A lovely write with a perfect ending. Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Victor :)
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:09:00 PM
Very romantic Victor, with a lovely happy ending. Hope you have a happy Easter. Tom
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Date: 4/1/2021 2:49:00 PM
The lost...the found! :)
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:53:00 AM
Wonderful beginning in this romantic ending. Enjoyed this sweet story of love, Victor.
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Date: 3/31/2021 9:36:00 PM
if you seek, you will find poem, love this Victor, the sentiment is wonderful.
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Date: 3/31/2021 4:50:00 PM
Nice tale. Your words filled my mind with a South Island landscape, of deep valleys and towering, snow clad mountains. Thanks mate, very enjoyable. Just one thought though, line 5, did you want 'warmth"? Cheers
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/31/2021 10:08:00 PM
Thanks mate.
Date: 3/31/2021 4:08:00 PM
Victor, I enjoyed this delightfully happy ending to a tale that began in heartache. Spring brings new life and hope, so how fitting it was for new life to be breathed into this old romance in the springtime.
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