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In Search of a Poem-Win

A 
Poem 
Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my
Heart.

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4th place win
Contest: Under 10 by Skat-Love
Dr. Ram Mehta

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Poet Destroyer A

November 9, 2013 at 10:44 PM

congratulations Dr Ram.... xox~ LINDA

Fatima Nusairat

November 9, 2013 at 5:31 PM

Congratulation..very nice poem

Karen Anglesey

November 9, 2013 at 12:30 PM

A stunning poem. Congrats on the win :)

Mario De Paz

November 9, 2013 at 9:43 AM

Your few verses are impressing. You deserve a better place than mine

Bukang Liwayway

November 9, 2013 at 9:30 AM

congratulations on your win friend Ram ;) cheers!!

Skat A

November 8, 2013 at 8:50 PM

sensual imagery Dr., CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

M.I.A .

November 10, 2011 at 9:13 PM

wow! the part 'breath in her mouth' is... profound!

Joe Maverick

November 10, 2011 at 7:40 PM

Really interested in the way you interact with the poetry in this piece Dr Ram, & love the way it is presented:)

Lori Lucas Mcclure

November 9, 2011 at 7:16 AM

Great write Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read!---Lori

Jslambert Mister Roboto

November 9, 2011 at 1:19 AM

Stellar Dr! Immensely Supah Poet Tree Soupin' GOOD!

Kim Merryman

November 8, 2011 at 11:44 PM

Very nice, Dr. Ram. Kim

Margaret Foster

November 8, 2011 at 11:20 PM

Neatly done... stirring awake the treasure within...good job Dr ram...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2011 at 10:00 PM

This is very nicely done, Dr. Ram! And thanks for my placement in your contest.

Gwendolen Song

November 8, 2011 at 9:12 PM

This is another new form for me, Doc. I believe poems make your mind come alive....and....since u have been writing for sooooo many years, u must have a very busy mind! This poem that sleeps in u also sleeps within me. Thanks for the placement in your quinzaine contest...fun stuff those quinzaines are! They actually sound like a fancy French pastry! mmm. Take care. Gwendolen