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In Search of ...

how can one love, 
            what they cannot see

and how can they see,
        what they do not seek

    In search of, you and me ...

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John Rhinem

March 3, 2011 at 7:25 AM

Smile ~ "Congrats, 'My Dear Brother Christopher,'" upon your sweeetened featuristic verse this week at PoeSoup ~ You must be super stoked at this great honour and perhaps it could signal but a glorious future to unfold for your humbled self my baby twin flame for surely, its looks like your going places my boy and the best advice I could offer would be to simply smile and somehow, pretend; "You Know???" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John! ~ Ps. *Smile, "Kudos X's Thrice &, 'Roll The Dice;'" Bye Bye!:) ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 2, 2011 at 6:31 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Christopher. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 3:08 PM

Reading this short piece reminded me of Leonard Nimoy because of its title. These few words collectively convey a beautiful message. Good work.

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2011 at 10:06 PM

I really like this little poem. Patricia here seems to have your style of conversation too. could be a love match! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 27, 2011 at 4:51 PM

Special words from a special poet and his heart and soul exude forth in every line.. charismatic piece Christopher.. enjoyed with luv my friend...

Deb Radke

January 21, 2011 at 6:25 AM

This is beautiful. And honest. And yearning. Very, very good. Thank you for reading my work and your incredibly inspiring comments. All my best. Love, Deb

Grace Eunsong Lee

July 4, 2010 at 5:08 PM

Welcome to poetrysoup, Christopher! Wonderful poem, it gives lots to think about. Enjoy yourself on the site! :D -Grace

Audrey Haick

June 29, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Great insight Christopher! And well-written, too! Welcome to PS! My take is really simple. If we feel the breeze and we love it, then we definitely can love something we cannot see..if a Mother can love her unborn child then that the possiblity to love without seeing exists. Just my take. Nevertheless, I enjoyed this! Thank you for reading and leaving your kind comments on my "Amazing Amazon". Peace, love, Audrey

Sarah Hales

June 29, 2010 at 5:12 AM

Oh I loved this ,,,, how can they see ,what they do not seek ....Great words Christopher sarah x And welcome to p soup x

Phyllis Babcock

June 28, 2010 at 8:20 AM

Hi Chris Welcome to our soup family. It is a great site and I hope you enjoy it here. What you describe sounds like fate or destiny. Enjoyed your write. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl

C.C Bloomsfield

June 27, 2010 at 10:01 PM

Welcome to this lovely poetry site Christopher,You are going to enjoy it here,with this extended poetry family!Interesting verses here..Maybe one can't love someone whom he cannot see,but can love someone through other senses,he can love someone through what he can feel,to seek to love someone is what keep love alive in the end,This is just my thought. .Enjoyed reading you and thanks for your kind comments,on my poetry,C elene !