Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

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I am a character
In search of my author
Walking great distances in a circle
Wishing for a plot
Wanting a destination
Perhaps a soliloquy
Please fill my lips with your words

If you wish I will play the fool
You be my King
I am yours to rule

For too long
I have been without a script
From a confused heart my thoughts have dripped
Within your story I wish to be gripped

The Author of me
From whom I have roamed
Through your scriptures I will comb
Till I learn the lines that lead me home
As I study please capture my mind
Till within my spirit we are intertwined
Light from light no longer blind

You are the beginning and completion of me
Apart from you I cease to be
Thankyou, Thankyou for helping me see
The part of Your story written for me

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Huberta Van Akkeren March 4, 2014 at 6:54 PM The is awesome...i love verse that has layers of meaning...very well written, i love the humility of the last line. Cheers Huberta Richard Lamoureux March 4, 2014 at 7:02 PM Thanks for your kind visit and thoughtful comment.

Just That Archaic Poet February 10, 2014 at 9:40 AM Surprised to see me, old friend? Well, wonderfully enough, I understood this poem quite well and marveled at your creativity and the crafty way you wrote this. It's really quite stunning, and you know if this is coming from me about a free-verse, that's saying a lot lol. I loved the message and sentiments expressed. Never, EVER thought I would "fave" a "free-verser", but this is exceptional and exquisite. Loved it, Richard :) Just That Archaic Poet February 10, 2014 at 10:05 AM Cool, I'm happy to hear that, because you have made my day on more than one occasion with your praise and reviews of my work. Glad I could reciprocate :) Richard Lamoureux February 10, 2014 at 9:55 AM You just made my day Chan!

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs February 9, 2014 at 9:43 AM absolutley awesome poem Richard, well put, I love the way you did this, seeking the author. Great work. Richard Lamoureux February 10, 2014 at 6:43 AM Good morning Gwen, thanks for taking time to comment.

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2014 at 9:02 PM wow, Richard, what an amazing poem this is. Monterey sees it as spiritual and it is obviously about God, but the romantic in me is seeing it as a love poem !! a fave! Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2014 at 12:15 AM Thanks Andrea, I hadn't thought of it that way but in looking at it I can see your perspective. Thanks for faving my poem.

Monterey Sirak February 6, 2014 at 8:31 AM Love it! Faith is a constant journey, always something ahead to lead us deeper. Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2014 at 10:23 AM So true.

Charmaine Chircop February 6, 2014 at 6:37 AM This is very beautiful..The author of your life bless us by giving us you as a character so wonderful to read and acknowledge. Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2014 at 10:24 AM Awes what a sweet thing to say. I think he was at his best when he made you.

Sarai Virden February 6, 2014 at 4:16 AM A heartfelt cry of faith my friend. Simply beautiful! Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2014 at 7:17 AM Wow, that sounds uncomfortable. It is good you have a way to distract yourself. I hope you have a quick recovery. Sarai Virden February 6, 2014 at 6:01 AM Oregon, I had neck surgery Last week and now this angelic halo keeps me awake. So I stroll the night in the sleeping halls of Poetry Soup. Just simply love soaking in all the talent and heart the Soupers have. Hope you are well dear one. Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2014 at 5:27 AM You are up early, where are you from? Thanks for the early morning visit.

Jerry Bolton February 5, 2014 at 4:19 PM Ahhh . . . Our poems coincide pretty much today. I hear you reaching out for help. I did that for years, trying to come to terms with it all. I wish you luck in your endeavor, and I have a feeling you will come out the winner. Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2014 at 5:35 PM I've been fortunate to have already come to terms with God many years ago. I am however still a work in progress, I never know what new lines he has ready for me to learn.

Eileen Manassian February 5, 2014 at 10:22 AM Richard....on the verge of tears....God bless...Can't say more....A favorite Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2014 at 10:26 AM I am thankful God is such a good planner. Eileen Manassian February 5, 2014 at 10:35 AM "For I know the plans I have for you,"says the Lord. "Plans to prosper and not to harm you. Plans to give you hope and a future." One of God's greatest promises recorded in the book of Jeremiah. Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2014 at 10:29 AM Thanks Eileen, that means a lot to me.