In Savannah

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A shadow moves in the dark, near the pool. Anyone's guess. Enjoy the humor. My son-in-law suggested the latter.

in Savannah a shadow creeps at dusk or stalks presumably a sasquatch or squirrel

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/6/2025 5:08:00 PM

Adorable, Kim. Heh-heh. lol. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 6:47:00 PM

Thanks :)

Paige Hind

Date: 7/6/2025 4:42:00 PM

Aw, this is really cute, Kim! <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 6:47:00 PM

LOL…thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2025 10:34:00 AM

Haha cute last line

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 11:37:00 AM

lol…thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2025 8:53:00 AM

What a creative/fun "In Savannah" write you have here. Love It... "Better hope it is a squirrel. Hahaha!!! Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 11:37:00 AM

Better hope so…lol

Silent One

Date: 7/6/2025 8:46:00 AM

Interesting one.. I assume it was squirrel lol

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2025 11:37:00 AM

LOL! I still don’t know.