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In Retrospect

Formed by mist that grasses adore Reveries young coat the sky Mixing life with energized core Kodak of faces streaking by - I collect vignettes from a rushed earth Filling cups of grails many by one With these journeys since my birth In rainstorms and summers rerun - To recall how wife and I debate Only to clutch her in tight embrace But time steals joy, not a dot late With broken chain, I can't keep pace. - Frank H: I RECALL Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 11:45:00 AM
Hi Jajosh:) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:37:00 PM
Jajosh, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2013 9:54:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Frank, Jojosh
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/4/2013 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.... I suspect I will be seeing you often on winners lists.... Jake
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Date: 11/4/2013 1:34:00 PM
how wistful can this get, jajosh.. congrats on your fine win... you are now on my list!...:)
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Date: 10/25/2013 6:04:00 PM
love your images and metaphors in this piece...nicely crafted poem...good luck in the contest :)
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