'in Response To My First Poem'

An Offering I offer you a glance And our eyes instantly lock. An unexpected shiver runs through me And time stands still on the clock. I offer you my hand And you take it warmly into yours. No words have to be spoken Yet we have opened so many doors. I offer you a dance And our bodies meld together. We are both in awe and astonished, Both wanting this to last forever. I offer you a kiss Which makes us quiver in delight. The passion and the pleasure Intensifies through the night. I offer you my heart and I trust that you won't break. To fall in glorious love is a risk we yearn to take. 3/6/2009 --------In Response------- I see you looking at me My eyes are riveted on yours I see you tremble from the cold I beckon you to come in from outdoors I take your delicate hand It's cold from the chilly night Your touch speaks volumes Your hand in mine feels so right I guide you to the dance floor Like magnets we sweetly entwine Impressed and full of wonderment I wish then that you'll be eternally mine I taste your heavenly lips So stimulating I shudder with bliss Exquisite and heavily intoxicating I want to drown is this delectable abyss I see love radiating from you Positive, confidant and sincere This journey is going to be amazing You are my future that is absolutely clear 09/28/15 For Silent One's contest