'in Response To My First Poem'
An Offering
I offer you a glance
And our eyes instantly lock.
An unexpected shiver runs through me
And time stands still on the clock.
I offer you my hand
And you take it warmly into yours.
No words have to be spoken
Yet we have opened so many doors.
I offer you a dance
And our bodies meld together.
We are both in awe and astonished,
Both wanting this to last forever.
I offer you a kiss
Which makes us quiver in delight.
The passion and the pleasure
Intensifies through the night.
I offer you my heart
and I trust that you won't break.
To fall in glorious love
is a risk we yearn to take.
3/6/2009
--------In Response-------
I see you looking at me
My eyes are riveted on yours
I see you tremble from the cold
I beckon you to come in from outdoors
I take your delicate hand
It's cold from the chilly night
Your touch speaks volumes
Your hand in mine feels so right
I guide you to the dance floor
Like magnets we sweetly entwine
Impressed and full of wonderment
I wish then that you'll be eternally mine
I taste your heavenly lips
So stimulating I shudder with bliss
Exquisite and heavily intoxicating
I want to drown is this delectable abyss
I see love radiating from you
Positive, confidant and sincere
This journey is going to be amazing
You are my future that is absolutely clear
09/28/15
For Silent One's contest
Copyright © Cecilia Macfarlane | Year Posted 2015
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