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In Response To If

Are able to keep your joy when all about you If you can appreciate another’s view, But sagely keep advice, inside, anew, If you can access this vital part of self, Or you can protect your heart and your child’s soul, Or keep happiness afloat, as if a gleaming elf, And do not get side-tracked like a giant troll, If you can enhance others, and help them spiritually grow. And you can use your thoughts to uplift worldly good, And you can ignore the whimpers of proponents of the woe, And incorporate the Golden Rule as we all should, If you can avoid what the masses deem as news, Twisted and turned in minds, who cannot hear, Or if you can put yourself in a million others’ shoes, And keep us close, you would be so ever dear. If you can keep daily optimism alive, And nurture it, no matter how hard times get And you can bring people up who hurt inside, And force yourself to look inside your soul’s calm kit, If you can force yourself to serve as a beacon to others, To help them to see their best and honest soul, And so hold on to them tight, as if they are your brothers, Accept them as is, your partners, good and whole. If you can weather the storm of haters, And walk beside them, with an open, loving heart, If you can aid empathetic regulators, Not emphasizing anything that might keep you apart If you can elevate without feeling smug, Without any angst in your heart toward the human race, If you can ignore a doubter’s bah or ugh You will win the top price, and always have a loving place. Written 10-09-2018 Contest: In Response to If…..Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 11/26/2018 12:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:24:00 PM
Nicely done, Caren, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading.. This was a contest I was confused to write
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/25/2018 9:43:00 PM
I try them all, Eve, throwing myself into the fray, because I know that it is subjective, and not easy, and the people who hold the contests are counting on them filling up. I had forgotten all about this one, actually.
Date: 11/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations Caren, well done...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/25/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. I was pretty excited when I realized whose contest it is. She is a PRO! I mean REALLY! I am crazy with happy now.
Date: 11/25/2018 10:11:00 AM
Haters gonna hate, best to ignore them.. I agree with all your lines Caren.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/25/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. I never have to ever look at the contest results. I enter all of them, and place about 40 percent of the time. The ones who tell me I have placed are the ones I look up to the most, so I am saying thank you! Again, I do not even have to look. Which I feel is the best way to do it for me anyway. Now I shall look just to see what I wrote because I truly never remember.
Date: 10/9/2018 3:16:00 PM
Impressive, Caren! "If" was a favorite of mine ever since I first read it in high school, I doubt I am brave enough to even attempt this one!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/10/2018 1:21:00 AM
I had to really pull it apart and study it first, believe me. It was a methodical process that I doubt I will attempt ever again.
Date: 10/9/2018 1:12:00 PM
wonderfully written, caren! good luck in the contest...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/9/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. This was the most difficult poem I have ever written with INTENTION.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:13:00 AM
Excellent message! I know I need to work on "sagely keep advice, inside"... ;) As Anne Lamont said, "Our help is usually not very helpful. Our help is often toxic. And help is the sunny side of control. Stop helping so much. Don't get your help and goodness all over everybody."
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/9/2018 11:31:00 AM
I am trying my best to be an un-helpful-un-helper. When I learn how to do it, I will not help you by teaching you because I will be so good at not helping.

Book: Shattered Sighs