In Pleasure

In Pleasure          
By Nate Spears
Published 2013 in “Death OF A Rose” By Nate Spears


White suit, top hat, pride feeling higher than spectacular 
The ugly duckling has opened a new chapter
Revealing transformation that’s becoming a true sensation
Buried in his inaugural feelings of gold treatment
There’s always a silver lining after the disaster
Every battle, each day 
Sanity is mastered
Life tries to defeat us, expiration tries to meets us
But tonight he’s on top of the world
He’s on top of Thee
He’s on top of a feathered fame beak 
This is one hell of a duckling I must proclaim.
Our love floats in current 
Through the City of Jacks
You’re the only Queen of my deck 
As we coast along these sparkling waters splashing our tails
The momentum of the St. Johns River flows to a love hotel
Vapors of our spirits arises above
Elevating beyond the skies
There’s no limit tonight 
As my mind is blown on cloud nine 
With love and happiness is in the atmosphere
Scrolling the screams of these peaceful waters 
With mean swagger
This night is unbelievable 
Unbelievable is this; unbelievable I won’t miss
 
I was once viewed as a total tragedy, with no immunity from havoc
Or grievance
Frowned upon by my community as a under achiever
As if I was an oil spill disaster 
With no relief at hand, 
But to tonight I clean up well with Dawn
 
The river flows peacefully after the storm deforms
Accompanied by grace, I’m accompanied by love
Accompanying my side 
Is a woman of grace.
As we keep our heads above these judgmental waters in Florida
The rivers will flow to Fingers Point
At the end of this place called home sweet home tonight
I’m just a kiss away 
From the Full Moonlight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/16/2013 8:44:00 PM
Hurrah for you, your love and your amazing poem. Congratulations, Love, Joyce
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Nate Spears
Date: 3/18/2013 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Joyce, I'm a true believer of what's inside you determines what comes out you. I'm filled with love that's amazing and my number one mission in this world is to spread it to as many people as I can. Thanks to all you guys for the kind comments. -Nate Spears
Date: 3/16/2013 1:26:00 PM
Nate congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/18/2013 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I'm glad you enjoyed my write and I hope that you have wonderful and blessed day.
Date: 3/16/2013 12:45:00 PM
Nate, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD
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Nate Spears
Date: 3/18/2013 11:46:00 AM
I've truly enjoyed my experience here so far on Poetry Soup. You guys are extremely talented and very sweet!!! Thanks for the kind words and God Bless.
Date: 2/19/2013 1:10:00 PM
I really like this..!! Love how you finished it up with "I'm just a kiss away from the full moonlight" Wraps the whole poem up nicely. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 2/20/2013 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Debra, Thanks for taking a minute to check out my work and thanks for your kind words as well :) It's always nice to hear a good love story, my goal was to try to bring one to life through this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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